Heya, I’ll just keep it short:
I’d love it I could get some feedback on my Jedi Temple game. It is supposed to be the Jedi Temple on Yavin, but something seems to be missing or wrong? I abandoned the project a week ago, and I might pick it up. Maybe the actual temple itself needs more detail, as everything else is? I probably won’t do the interior for it. Thanks.
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You need to provide us with more pictures, we can barely see anything from the one picture you posted. The trees are blocking a lot of it.
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I think you need to make it more ruined so it looks like its more real instead of that Roblox looking way. Maybe add cracks or boulders around it and I think it needs to be darker with out that texture.
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Hello, great build so far. For future reference maybe make the side view more visible as it does not show the viewer what could be visible on the side, the front looks really nice but once again could possibly have more detailed added like, cracks, corrosion on the material. Keep up with the good work!
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The Jedi Temple is very good so far, I think that you could add a bit more vegetation around the whole land since it’s quite looking empty. I do believe you could add some more trees to cover the whole land so it doesn’t look all spaced out like that, you could try looking up some reference image to get an idea on what I’m talking about.
I recommend that you make the temple look all worn down so it could look like it’s been abandoned for a while. I believe you could possibly add some foliage on the temple such as (vines, moss, weeds, dirt). You could also add some cracks around the whole temple and some moss on the material that would make it look more better.
Another thing I’ll say is if you look at a couple of images of the temple you’ll see it has a kind of an eerie vibe to it, I would add a bit of fog to your scene so it looks more realistic.
After all, it’s looking pretty good.
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Overall great temple, A few suggestions Id give is matching the color of grass to the color themes of the trees. It would give a much more better feeling and vibe of yavin and the temple.
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