What are things that should've been improved for this trailer of my Roblox game for Halloween?

Here’s the trailer video BloodyParty Roblox Gameplay Trailer - YouTube

So maybe next time If I or my friend make a new trailer that looks more better

Provide some good feedbacks

I guess if that’s allowed that I’ll also provide a feedback for it too so here’s mine

-Maybe you should’ve added more lighting to make it look more cinematic
-Would not suggest using animation from Roblox bundle to some characters in the trailer when you gave them a script to get them animated
-Should probably turn off your mic icon
-Maybe the clown killing the victim should’ve had more detail
-At the end, the scene looks like it’s cropped and should change the title better next time
-Would be nice if character’s face had animation
-Maybe change the location to have more detail graphics

Let me know what’s yours

I’ve mostly worked on the trailer for the animation and gameplay and then the rest of my friends edited the video

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