What are your feedbacks on this charger monster I made?

Introduction

So i’m making a game about ruins, where you got trapped and you need to find a key to unlock an exit and escape, so i made one of the monsters and i want to see what i can add to make it more polished and better, maybe even change some things. Here is the video showcasing the monster:

Let me know what you think!

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that looks pretty good keep on going and you might make it viral one day! i do suggest learnign blender instead of using normal roblox parts

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Yeah, but um, first off, my computer does not handle blender, second, blender looks way too complex to me, but still, thank you

looks pretty good
something i noticed was there was no sound effects, is this something you were planning on adding?

and also
I do like the dust trail, but it would look even better if there was a second dust trail that instead of being locked to the monster, it will be left behind it. Kinda like a car that’s on a dusty path, there would be a dust trail behind it

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Yeah, i saw that there was no sound effects, (also sorry for the late response) but it’s because im going to add soon, cuz I have no headphones or earphones to test the sounds.

Also, i like your “second trail” idea, i may consider adding it, but overall, thank you for your opinion!

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So um, i have a question, do you have anything to say for me to add, not just the monster, but to the game overall?