What could I do to improve this?

I made this logo for a pizzeria build i’m making and i’m really proud of it but something feels off about it. If anyone has tips for how I could improve this logo that would be great

Maybe make it 3D, or add some shadows or sunrays on the letters.

Now that I think of it, maybe add in some green for that Italian look.

I’m not really a designer — these are just some ideas I had.

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  1. Maybe add a blured out background behind and add a shadow to the text
  2. I’m personally not really a fan of the slanted text, instead maybe just have regular positioned text
  3. Shrink the text a tiny bit so that it’s not so close to the edges of the picture
  4. Reduce the text outlines a tiny bit
  5. I like what you’ve done with the pizza but right now it looks very unfinished :sob:, improve this by straightening areas which are supposed to be straight (hopefully that makes sense)
  6. Lastly, you could add a gradient to the text
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As @Agnoize said I think a shadow will do a good number on making it pop out more. For the green, make the Gianni’s part white outline and Pizzeria with a green outline (Darkish Green), to represent the Italian flag. Maybe tone down the white just a little bit just a smidge, and honestly I would say the logo is amazing.

I don’t know the game but if breadsticks are in the game you could make the first I in Giannis a breadstick. Could also add some sauce dripping off of it.

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