What do you guys think of my homestore?

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#1

i havent made it public yet but I want to know if it looks presentable and if you would think it looked cool if you went there to buy clothes.

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im not very good at building so any feedback will be appreciated :smiley:

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#2

Hey there! The build has itā€™s own ā€œvibeā€ style. Details can always be added on, overall it looks great and improvements in detailing can be made.

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#3

I like it but some improvements can be done to make it better.

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#4

I think that this build is great. But I think that you should try to add more detail and use smaller increments as the build looks very blocky.

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#5

thank you so much for your feedback, what improvements do you think i can make :o thank you for your time commenting btw :smiley:

#6

Oh I see, I tried making it smaller though but the end result still came out quite blocky pwp do you have any advices on this? Thank you so much for commenting btw :smiley:

#7

Thank you! I will try to add more details and im glad you got the vibe style from it I tried to make it look nice and vibey.

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#8

Looks nice enough that Iā€™d go in there in real life :grinning:

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#9

thank you so much for compliment!! :d I hope to improve it more but im happy you find it nice :smiley:

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#10

Yeah :grinning: the only thing Iā€™d recommend is to add some more lighting.

#11

Iā€™d use F3X. It makes it really to make smaller increments as it shows you how many studs youā€™ve resized the object.

#12

It looks pretty good but you should make in spawn inside de store and donā€™t let players to outside because outside is so empty

#13

Make an invisible roof on and set camera a zoom distance in straterplayer settings

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#14

Hey! I love it! When taking photos, try raising the studio quality to make it look better when showcasing it.

Roblox Studio>File>Studio Settings>Rendering>Edit Quality Level
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#15

To be honest, it doesnā€™t look bad. But, here are some things that can improve it.

  • Particle effects

  • Change the lighting technology to Future if you havenā€™t done so. Future makes the shadows and light more sharp and clear. Itā€™s great for showcase games.

  • some blur

  • change the ambient to a pinkish or purple color.

  • add a little more saturation

#16

Looks quite nice! Although the map seems very familiarā€¦

#17

Haha I seen better.
Actually no. i didnt.

#18

I think itā€™s your game graphics, if you turn them higher the building edges wonā€™t look as pixelated