Hi everyone! I just wanted to know what do you think about this icon I made for my Obby game. I’m just having weird problems in blender so I want to know if the renders are ok.
What do you think I can improve? It will help a lot if you reply! Thanks for reading!
Have a nice day.
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It looks good to me.
Great job keep up the great work!
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The face on the victim looks… off?
I can see you were probably going for a drawn- on face style, but the face looks very low- effort. It also doesnt match with the murderer’s textured face,
The background also doesnt really fit, as it is quite darker compared to the almost hazy foreground.
Overall, nice logo, but needs a little tweaking. 
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I love it. I like the victims hat “I 
obbys” and his little sad face it just makes me laugh. 
Great icon I love it. 
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it looks bad! the render’s texture’s and model is messed up, 
then the arm posing of the black shirt guy is VERY WEIRD!
and the are standing on mid air, make them stand on some obby at least.
don’t get me started on the background!
make it LESS clickbaity, these escape obbies are you escaping a person’s body, right? well this shows something way different! i know your game isn’t about escaping you with a knife.
and that escale gataller obby is in a bad font, get a logo designer for that.
i rate it 2/10
also sorry for being a little ‘harsh’
Wow it looks really nice! all iw ould say is maybe change the backround a little bit… But evertything else is pretty good!
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looks great, maybe the background could use some reworking though.
Maybe make the text easier to read.
It took a whole 10 seconds for me to figure out what it said.
What can I change from the background to make it better?
Not that’s it’s bad or anything it’s good and I like it! But in my opinion, it might look a bit better with a background that has more to do with the game. like a map or any other things, you think might fit well in it.
Heya! After more than a month, I have made a new and remastered icon for the game. I fixed all the textures that were messed up and added another background.
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the render is good so you fixed that, good work fren. maybe make the person with knife’s character a little better (change the shirt, remove the headphones, backpack, sword, burger, shoulder pal, make it look like a normal person irl). and make them blend in with the background, it looks like its just a bcakcground and nothing else at this moment. also u seriously need to improve the ‘escape cataller obby’ font. change it to something like Minecraftia or Mario Kart DS 6/10
also found another little bend or texture issue:’
is that a pocket? it looks a little weird.