What do you think about these renders?

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#1

Hello everyone! i’ve made some renders recently, and i need some (constructive) feedback.

Note: i am new to making renders.

Ro-bank
a room
^ i saw some mistakes (carpet floating, weirdness near the window) but i don’t want to render it again for 30 minutes.
edit: fixed link

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#2

Alright.

This one has a few things that makes it awkward:

• The scene is pretty flat overall. A lot of GFX’s focus on perspective, which could make it easier.

• This characters have awkward positioning from what I can see.

• The lighting makes it look like a cloud is covering the sun - in a way. It looks rather dark.

This one is actually pretty good! I think something that’s missing is shadows, but the lighting’s nice on this one. Again, perspective, however it was cute this time. Reminds me of something I’d see on a title screen (similar to House Flipper lol)

I hope I haven’t come off as harsh, and I’m open to hear what you think about my opinion. I intended this to be constructive criticism, and I have tried to give solutions to said criticism.

And please don’t be discouraged; It takes time and practice to perfect a craft :))

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#3

no, your opinion isn’t harsh. i appreciate your feedback, as any feedback will help me learn. thanks for the feedback.

as for the lighting in ro-bank, it’s sunset so the light isn’t as strong and yellow-ish.

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#4

Thankyou for being so nice!

I see, I didn’t look at it as a sunset so that could be why I didn’t interpret the lighting as you did, I can see it now though, thanks for informing me :))

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