Hey devs,
As my friend know, I have started a project that will be fully complete on December 21st 2019. The game will be released on July 23rd 2019.
I just need an opinion on my lobby / city before I continue with it. I want to create a racing game based off of the Need For Speed™ games.
Here is the game!
Check out Roblox Racing Lobby on Roblox Underground Racers - Roblox
Thank you for supporting the game’s development!
Feel free to give suggestions down below!
No offense, this is poorly made.
This was only a start on what I am planning. Thanks for support! I will make sure to fix these problems! Sorry!
I cannot since I am on mobile.
There doesn’t seem to be any effort put into this. Most of it is just free models placed into the game.
I’d recommend maybe making your own vehicles, and turning down the neon intensity, it’s far too bright, even with the lowest graphics.
Are you releasing this game before it’s complete?
Also I’ve noticed there are alot of real life company logos in the game, and I highly suggest taking them out.
As others have stated, there are a ton of free models here, and you should learn to create stuff yourself. Once you perfect building, your builds will be 100% better than free models.
All of the cars are glitchy in the dealership.
Honestly, you need to find pictures off of Google, and just replicate those builds on Roblox. Nobody is willing to play a free model game.
The houses should be fixed now.
The idea you are going for seems cool, but there are alot of things you could improve on:
This should not be further out than the pole in my opinion, what you could do is resize it inwards.
This seems great on this side
With the windows you could add some yellow colored neon bricks right behind the glass panel.
You could make the pillars with the door a bit more thin.
Don’t make an entire building have the neon effect
Here you could use some plugins to fill the gaps, such as gapfill or resize allign, higly recommend that.
I would also add lights inside the store.
Maybe add some more details to the sign?
One last thing, I think you should decide to use textures or not.
In most cases I have experienced personally, I don’t enjoy half of the buildings having textures while the other half does not use any textures.
Yikes! Ok so granted I started out with free models but I learned over time. …So I’m going to help you learn how and why you shouldn’t rely on free models. Free models can be useful but most of them are free because they’re not the highest grade. Free models if used shouldn’t be used if it doesn’t fit the theme. When I go into your game I see block cars blocky detailed cars and smooth mesh cars. I also see a realistic building that’s a free model, two that are blocky, a big massive blocky dealer ship, and a glowing building of some kind. Let me break down what I think should be changed and how I would go about making one from the ground up…
Glowing building, personally I’m not sure what this is but I know how It’s caused. Someone tried to improve the lighting inside the building so they added points of lights.Try making the surrounding blocks or the block(s) above it not have a shadow by going into properties and disabling it.
Blocky cars and buildings, try making your own cars and buildings using blender or Roblox studio. It will take some time to learn but I’d look it up on You Tube that’s how I learned.
Model a 3d Car | part 2 | background images & reference (Blender tutorial) - YouTube
The Roads, maybe add some texture like concrete and some potholes cracks etc.
New road textures for realistic 3d rendering - YouTube
Sign, add some depth to it look up some real-life care dealer signs and re-create it on Photo shot or any free editing soft ware there are free on-line editing soft ware.
The bottom line is don’t use free models and make the building themes work. Also check out some real life examples on google images. If you have any questions feel free to message me on Twitter, Roblox, or the DevFourm
