What is your first impression when you see the game + what's an optimal CTR/CPP?

Hi,
I released my game 5 days ago, and so far have spent about R$2800 on advertisements.
I’ve joined the game a couple of times to get feedback and fix bugs throughout, but am just wondering whether when seeing the icon and images, you yourself would feel compelled to play in the first place. Additionally, what other players think of this based off the CTR/CPP, as I am not sure whether it would be considered good or not.
My last question is after how many visits you got your first sale.
I appreciate all and any feedback, tips and constructive criticism. Thanks!
This is the icon
Screenshot 2023-07-25 at 10.52.46

and this is the link to the game

Here are some of the sponsored ad stats:




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Having good thumbnails and posters plays a huge part in whether or not somebody decides to even click on your game or play it

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I don’t play tycoons AT ALL so my opinion is a bit bias as I probably wouldn’t look at your game BUT, some tycoons do reel me in a bit if they have a good game icon. Yours looks kinda like you got a random image off the internet and put it as your tycoon image. It doesn’t match the Roblox vibe at all and already paints the idea in my mind that I will most likely be getting something basic (not that your game is basic). I am not in any way a GFX artist but I feel like incorporating Roblox avatars into your game icon would help. I feel like it always does for any game but I may be wrong…

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Taking a second look at my icon I actually see exactly what you mean. The image was made on stable diffusion. At first I thought it looked cool and futuristic, but looking at other games icons again, along with what you said, I see what you mean. It looks less intriguing and like something hastily put together, since it doesn’t seem very robloxy. I’ll try and fix that. Thanks for the detailed insight!

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No problem, I hope your game does well!

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Like some other Developers had already mentioned, it seemed out-of-place, considering it looks like it isn’t Roblox, with no avatars floating around etc.

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@seemerollingnowudont @Deb0rahAliWilliams
I’ve given the icon more of a Roblox touch. Hopefully that will improve CTR and co. Thanks! Any other suggestions always welcome :smile:

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Looks great, but I don’t think there’s a need to place 2 duplicate avatars! 1 should be sufficient in this case!

Good luck on your game!

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Hi i played it yesterday and i have two feedback items:

  1. The text of the buttons is very hard to read, specially on mobile really gets blend in with the background.or floor (check the image there, maybe add a background and or outline the text)

  2. I saw someone with a cool ship, and also what the game tells you you can ride ships and discover the galaxy but there is no indication of how long it will take me as a new user to get from clicking buttons to riding ships (which was what interested me the most).

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Yes, I personally am not into tycoons, but if I was a little child I would click that so fast!

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Those are actually 2 very good points. I’ll try fix that. Thank you!

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