What should i add here

currently when you join the game, you get greeted with this


but it seems boring and basic, any suggestions?

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i would probably try to add stars, other planets, or some sort of colorful gas like in the movies

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You could go with a simple ui design, in that case I would change the text to Gotham and make a simple animation when clicked.

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could possibly add a spaceship in front of the camera facing the planet, sort of like what Sons of the Forest has for their intro screen

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I added a space sky with stars, changed the lighting a bit and added a small spaceship (should i keep it there or what)

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i think it makes for a good addition, as well as the skybox. some final changes that i’d say nee to be made is just the text formatting. i’m not personally a big fan of it with that white outline.

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maybe add a Camera, which orbits arround the planet, and tween the spaceship slightly towards the planet

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I’d drop the spaceship, drop the white outlines, add some additional colour. Use Roblox lighting to your advantage, including Sun rays, bloom, colour correction, etc.

Here’s one I cooked up in 5 minutes:

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Create a shot of something flying to the red planet: Star Trek: Deep Space Nine - 4K / HD Intro - NeonVisual - YouTube.
When you click the TextButton, fade in as the Camera pulls into a close shot of the red planet.

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good idea but thats quite hard to do for me, i might try later.

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Currently this is what i got, i removed the white lines although i will keep the font, i might change up the lighting later, is this better?

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I would cut ‘the Red Planet’ from the Enter button, since the title above already tells us the name of this planet.

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