Hello!
As you may of have seen in the title I’m looking to improve my building skills.
I want to be able to make a living off of Roblox (not solely) in the near future.
Eventually having commissions come to me instead of me applying for them. 
Here are some of my most recent builds:
Keep in mind I’m not really looking for praise.
(Not to discourage you from complimenting anything unique that you have seen done in my builds).
I am looking for constructive criticism
So any flaws and weak points that you may have seen in some of the builds above
Please point them out no matter how small or insignificant it is.
Tips are very well accepted too.
Thanks for your time 
p.s (this might be the wrong place to post this)