Hello, For The 4th Time. I just can’t stop…
Got Another Showcase Out. Using Depth of Field. I’d Like Some Feedback. Thank You
Wherl Park [Showcase] - Roblox ( I advise running On PC.)
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It looks amazing but there is room for improvement. First of all, the trees look copied and pasted. Try adding more variations to the trees. (Taller or smaller trees etc.) The background also looks dull, maybe add some mountains or if it’s a city park maybe add buildings with fencing. That’s all I have. Overall, looks exquisite. Keep it up!
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This is good at the start! The trees fit well with the design try adding variation to it from looking repetitive add 2 or 3 variety of tree, I think that it works well!
If I were provide feedback on your creation, it would probably be to have a bit more ground foliage on the grass, sort of like there’s a pond or a playground somewhere on the land could give it more detail. Whether it’s small or large or more small objects on the grass should be placed not to much since it’s not a forest, bushes or flowers surrounding the area could work whatever looks good to you.
Something else you could try is to make the branches have different height and angles they seem repetitive at the top, and try experimenting with placing wider - larger trees. It could give the park a way more natural feel, at the moment it quite too open and plain like. Otherwise, this is good.
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The Showcase
The showcase itself is pretty good so far! The lighting is perfect, and I really like this. I would add more nature too it, since it’s just mostly trees, maybe add these?
- Flowers
- More Rocks
- Any type of Bushes
- Mushrooms