Looking for feedback on the creation i made with Chef_Tortelini!
Feel free to write any opinions you have,I will take them as positive feedback for my future projects!
Place Link : Cold Winter Cabin
This is a Showcase,There is no goal to the game!
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OkayโฆThat is one of my favorite Cabin builds Iโve ever seen!! I love that itโs so detailed, but you detailed it in all the right places. 
I honestly donโt have anything that bad to say about itโฆItโs just me being nit-picky on a few places.
Firstly, in multiple places, you have overlapping partsโฆSuch as these:
Personally, I wouldโve liked to see custom bricks for the steps, like the ones you did for the base of the cabin.
And the bricks at the cabin, I think they should meet up better at the corners so they appear to be continuous, as youโd see on a normal house.
Inside of the cabin and to the left, I noticed a very small gap in the wallโฆ
And outside, I like the barrel thing, but I donโt think the texture of the door matches the barrel itself. It seems too out of place to me.
Again, itโs very well made and I think you did a wonderful job on it. Those are just my very nit-picky critiques.
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Looks amazing! I especially like the particle effects, theyโre really well made!
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Thanks for the great Feedback!,I respect this.
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It looks really amazing and I like your attention to detail. Great work 
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My main critique is that you lack a consistent level of detail. Youโll have a highly interior food etcetera and then then this for snow.
Not that Im say you did, but it just gives off the same vibe free models do just because of how big of a difference in quality of this build there are.
Thanks! Ill try better nextime,all those snow-lines are hand made,and this is a project i made with a beginner builder to give him a chance,to join in with me. We will fix these little errors soon
Awesome showcase, I really enjoy your use of particles and lighting in places where people would usually ignore it. The only thing I also noticed as said in another reply, the consistency of detail is off but overall it does look great!
Also, respect for letting a beginner builder work with you. Always nice introducing new people to the development world.
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This game gives the perfect holiday/winter effect with the lighting and environment. Good work!
I hate to reiterate as many things have already been said on this thread, but I believe this showcase has some great attention to detail in some often-unexpected areas. It gives a cold ambience which immediately feels very warm as soon as you enter the house.
In addition, the northern lights feel like a great touch that would not be unfitting in a much larger fleshed out environment.
A touch that may have been nice to add is some variance to the ice, whether thatโs randomly generated cracks or chunks of the ice missing. Besides some of the aforementioned quirks that often come with building in Roblox, I believe itโs a nice build overall. I do think something that would be beneficial to the game would be either a โshadowโ block in front of this gate (with collisions turned off), or just more of a lighting shift (perhaps flickering lights would be nice).
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Sorry for the late reaction, but this is great!
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