I have been working on a game called MANHUNT, which is a realistic horror-esque (or atleast is what I am trying to go for) murder mystery game and I need some feedback on what I have done so far
https://www.roblox.com/games/6599305460/MANHUNT
Notes:
-You are locked in first person during matches
-Shop and inventory don’t work right now (but I am getting closer to getting it to work!)
-Game needs 2 or more players to start
-A lot of things in it are placeholders, more is coming!
-This game has BLOOD, but it is automatically disabled, you can enable it in settings on the main menu (no dismemberment or any of that stuff, just simple blood pools)
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Pretty cool main screen! Your player ui is bunched up with the not enough players maybe was a mistake. But that was the only thing that bugged me.
Camera is really clean. It looks really good so far for what you have done. I know a lot of things are placeholders, but here is my feedback. I unfortunately wasn’t able to play a round since there wasn’t anyone else playing, but I’ll leave my feedback from the menu screen.
-The menu list feels really unresponsive due to the lack of animation for the UI. Maybe add hover animations to the buttons, adding satisfying sounds, etc.
-The settings screen is quite bland at the moment. The buttons should really be distinguished from the description of what they do. Maybe add icons/checkboxes/framework to make it so the settings menu isn’t just white text on a gray background. Although I know like you said, there are lots of placeholders; but I am being as picky as I can since you asked for feedback.
-The menu button hitboxes are quite wide for being transparent and only seeing the text.
-And lastly, at least in my perspective, using a knife as a game icon is really oversaturated and overused for murder games. Seeing a murder game with a knife as the game icon sort of makes me go “oh, it’s another one of those.” It seems your game’s quality is beginning to far exceed the standard murder game, but you may not be able to give that first impression off to new players if the game icon doesn’t pull them in.
Other than that, the camera manipulation is awesome. I love the lobby atmosphere, the camera motion, and the effects on the screen.
Looks promising. Thumbs up from me. Good luck!
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Thanks for the feedback, i will improve on the main menu, i can join if you want to play a round 