I spent a good 45 minutes on the for a commission. Do you guys like it though?
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I mean, it’s not that bad.
The person has way too much lighting on the head, and the avatar is roughly edited onto the background. The logo has too much inner glow, although it’s not too shabby.
I see you’re starting out, and I strongly recommend GFX Comet’s tutorials on how to make better GFXs.
You have tons of potential, keep it up!
I started GFX yesterday and I also did this commission for 200 robux which is an underprice, Thanks for the feedback though, it’s really appreciated!
No, I would say that is a definite OVERPRICE. It seems very amatuer, with poor lighting and using the eevee engine. Here are some of mine, which I CHARGE 100 for.
These are some of my older work, from around a year ago. You should not charge so much for your work.
Try using the cycles engine, and fixing that text. The eevee engine is very unreliable and is very very hit or miss
Alright, thanks for the help! Really appreciated
not really, because the logo isn’t great and the image qualities don’t match up, the render doesn’t havem atching or good lighting and its too bright, the clothin design is kind of awkward for this time and thing and the arm is bent in a WEIRD WEIRD WEIRD way, and as I say don’t show the legs, it doesn’t look good and the logo takes up wayy too much of the screen and make the entire thing more contrast.
nope thats overpriced i’d say this is worth around 30 - 75 robux
dont charge so much, especially when you are so inexperienced and just starting commisions
sorry for being so mean, thats just me
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I agree with the other comments, the avatars head has way too much lighting on the head. The background is nice, it pulls the font color all together! To even out the head portion I would a Santa hat, a small one so it does feel to cluttered, just to pull the ones on the logo together.
Other than that I have no complaints! Keep up the work!
This was actually a commission for 50 robux, I got mixed up with a different one
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Try to add some bending in pose. Very R6
If you want my complete honest opinion, I think it’s quite generic and average. I am not trying to be mean but I think that it looks unoriginal and I feel like I have seen that GFX theme millions of times. The happy face with a person waving. I think that you should add a snowy background since it’s a Christmas theme. The Santa hats are quite cartoony in contrast to the shading of your figure and the detail of the text. Don’t try and mix cartoony with detail. It barely ever works. I think you are on the right track however, so keep up the good work.