Would you buy this T-shirt?

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#1

Hello everyone, I thought I would sell a T-shirt with a face and in its description I would tell a mini story.

But the t-shirt is too plain and I don’t think it would sell. I want to know how to make this shirt more beautiful, what if you would buy it for 3 robux?

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Your story:

T-shirt I would sell:

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#2

Would anyone buy or have an idea to make this shirt more beautiful?

:v: Thanks for reading.

#3

I am in shock what I understood

#4

Bro I’m on my way rn ready to buy.

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#5

What sir understand? My English is not one of the best.

#6

Personnaly I would buy lol. Think you could get sales with it.

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#7

I didn’t put the sale, Maybe later I’ll put it up for sale.

#8

It’s all a lie

#9

I don’t understand sir. :confused:

How is that a lie?

#10

very scary shirt and check your phone for a text from gucci fr

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#11

The story is a lie. You scare people. I’m not even 16. I didn’t even get scared. He doesn’t scare people, but there are people from the picture and from the story. I’m sorry if I upset you, but this is his honesty.

#12

It didn’t make me upset, How can I improve the mini story?

I want to do something fun, and I’m open to all criticism and suggestions. :+1::v:

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#13

I mean, this is a long story, which means a lie?

#14

So, it’s just a simplistic t-shirt with a little spooky story that gives it some character.

It’s fine for what it is, but both the ones you linked aren’t on-sale.

If you were to get scared by some red smiley face t-shirt on the ROBLOX Catalog then you’re too young to handle things that are far more scary. This is very mild in comparison.

It shouldn’t scare people, and if it does then what I said above goes along with that.

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#15

I am not afraid, but I feel that there are people who are afraid

#16

I play horror maps every day
I play all the scary maps

#17

Is that as it is a very simple t-shirt, I don’t know if it would sell.

So I thought of asking the community if you would buy this t-shirt or not.

#18

Do sir think that if I put it up for sale, people would buy it? :sweat_smile:

#19

I wouldn’t buy it. I may buy it if it were a shirt instead of a t-shirt. You can make one easily using BeFunky and a transparent shirt template