Hey! I’m Planing on advertising my game soon, and I’ve made these two ads.
Would you Click on these Ads, and if you would, which one would you rather click?
Ad 1
Ad 2
Also, if you wouldn’t click On These Ads, Please Let me know how I can improve.
Thanks - Icecatz
(Edit) here is the game link
I would probably click on the second one.
Probably the second one, but I’d put the dollar sign in front of the number.
I might click on the second one, especially since the use of quotes in the first looks like scare quotes: quotes that make the statement look sarcastic and generally untrue. I would also recommend adding the game name or studio/user name somewhere.
The second is kinda clickbaiting, is a good ad and it gets people attention, I would click on the first one cause Arsenal is considered one of the best FPS games on Roblox so I doubt it is better, even tho first one gonna get a lot of players it will come along with a lot of dislikes if it doesnt give what it promises.
First one is quite interesting, especially if you’re looking to attract more mature audience
i would click on none of them, improve font, join button, muzzle flash, and the gfx.
and dont have text like that, just keep it simple, and include your game title
wouldnt click 1st one
but the second one… maybe
I wouldn’t click on this ad because it makes your game seem like just another first person shooter.
There are a bunch of first person shooter games on Roblox. What makes your game stand out? Whatever it is, it’s not showcased in this ad.
IMHO: If I saw this in on the website I would probably not even notice it.
Okay, maybe I would but I don’t think I would click on it. For another target audience maybe yes. I don’t really speak for younger people though.
Trying to showcase the graphics by zooming in on the muzzle flash because thats what it actually looks like in game and graphics are what make the games stand out.
My target audience is older people (14-18) that enjoy shooter games.
I wouldn’t click on any of them. I don’t like the first one especially. Both I probably have seen many times. What is special about the game ?
I wouldn’t click on any, Dont like fps games that much.
The Graphics, and the fast gameplay style
I would most likely click on the 2nd, but at the same time, I would also click neither of them.
For the 1st Ad, I simply don’t like your use of scare quotes. I dislike advertisements that bring merit to their game simply by comparing it to another popular one. Rather than pointing out that you’re better than your competition, advertise something that is unique or cool about your game. Otherwise, when I look at this, I think two things:
1: This is probably a game trying to mimic Arsenal.
2: This is a game made by a smaller and less known creator. It probably isn’t as good as Arsenal.
Don’t bring down another product to bolster yours. Rather, try to accentuate the highlight of your game in a short quote like the first one.
I don’t see much of a problem with the 2nd one, but I would absolutely change the currency that you’re using. Although it didn’t come up on my mind, I could definitely see a young kid thinking that using that code would get them 250 real dollars. Instead of using the $ sign, use the unique currency of your game if you have one (like credits or coins).
I like the visuals of the gun on the side and the muzzle flash looks pretty cool. However, I also suggest experimenting with other fonts and see if there’s one that fits better. Good job and good luck!
I really like this ad. If I saw it I would click on it, but I usually don’t click on ads (or even pay attention to them). This would stand out if it was on my screen, maybe if anything a little bit more color on the “BETTER THAN ARSENAL.” But, otherwise this is an amazing ad, nice work!
make it the games logo, make the screenshot a gfx so it has better lighting, and put some extra text like a catchphrase or whatever on there too.
