~Hello~
I just made a new Ad! What do you think of it? Do you have any ideas for improvements? Would you click on it?
Also: Which Style should I use
~The Ads~
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Thank you for the Feedback
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Really good ads!
I like the first style a lot more than the second.
Maybe you could add a text or something like that saying: “Are you good enough to escape?”
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I’d say you make it more attractive to a specific genre, some temptation should be caused to click it!
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I wouldn’t, I prefer clickbait badly made ads for stupid games that took 2 days to make.
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I think what’s better there is again, on your other post, I gave feedback upon,
For this though, maybe just make their facial expression to that of what they’re facing in their situation, rather than smiling at the camera for a photoshoot, however in honesty, I think I will and it seems to be a great ad.
Not to be rude, but they’re asking for feedback on improvements on their ad, not to mention, not everyone is like you who prefer clickbait ads.
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The pyramid is hardly visible in the ad, and I could barely tell what’s going on. Maybe don’t go too harsh on the blurring. The logo and the lighting looks nice, though.
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They asked whether I would click on the ad, and I said my opinion 
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I would but the head seems a little distorted. Veery nice other wise!
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I never click ads, but if I would be an ad clicker, then maybe I would click yours.
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Although the style of the ads are good, I would suggest adding some text to lure people to join the game. If people just see the person, they probably won’t click.
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not really, i dont know why i should play this game or anything,the posing on gfx is really not good, the abckground and stuff kinda weird and but still first better
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I say the second one looks best.
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where is his left arm ? LOL or am i just blind
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2nd one is better. on the bottom add a play button
also where are his arms pointing
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It’s a good ad but I think you should change the posing a little bit.
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sorry but i don’t click on ads
but the ad is ok
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