Would you click on this Wipeout ad?

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#10

The ad look very wonderful, seems really interesting for me to click on it. “WIPEOUT” , TBS and with blue background does fit well. However, the character and pink text do not fit in the ad. This lost interest to me and perhaps I won’t click your ad. The character and outline is very pixel meaning it’s not in good qualify.

Also, what just @BaggyChris said that you should get rid of wipeout and tbs to prevent copyright aka DMCA! Maybe replace with your own game, description, icon, thumbnail, etc.

#11

Everything looks fine, except for the huge pixelated character, you should really get blender. You should watch this to learn some of the basics of rendering characters. Its really not as hard as it seems.
Here are some resources to get you started.

The first video should be all you need, but if you want to get more into blender, you can watch the second vid. c:

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#12

It’s more of a prize, if they win, they would get payed out from the group funds. It’s a gameshow. :smile:

#13

I believe that’s still against TOS.

#14

If you watched the new ad for Wipeout on YouTube, you can see the purple text. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gB0ExyOaE20

#15

Though the roblox guy is really pixelated, I think the rest of it is perfect. It stands out really well because of the bright colours I think it is fine.

#16

Promising people robux is against the TOS. But I am sure they have exemptions to it.

#17

Giving Away Robux Is Against The TOS Thats Why LandonRB Got Terminated.

#18

I don’t click on many ads!

However, I noticed you said you’d give away 250 Robux. That is against Roblox TOS, so It’d be better to giveaway some sort of ingame prize instead.

#19

The “Hosted By” came from the Tv show’s ad. https://youtu.be/gB0ExyOaE20

#20

I don’t think I would to be honest. Not much else to say. It looks a bit weird with perfect quality then this pixely roblox head. The font difference is also a bit jarring.

#21

No, I wouldn’t because

  1. The ad looks way too lazy, using default fonts and your character looks way too pixelated. I get that it’s hard to make greenscreens work but if you want people to click your ad, you need to hire a professional or do a better job.

  2. A lot of people, including me, have AdBlocker so we wouldn’t even see it.

  3. There’s nothing about prizes or anything on it, people will just ignore your ad because they don’t want to play a wipeout game unless you have nothing to do, really.

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#22

So I can’t pay anyone out through group funds?
Why does it exist?

#23

You can, but you can’t promise them robux.

#24

Not promising, just paying them out through funds.

#25

That’s promising, but don’t worry I will be out of your way, like it’s honestly no big deal.
And besides, you should be fine.

#26

I don’t click ads that much but I think there will be enough to do on this ad bc it looks pretty amazing.

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#27

I wouldn’t click on this ad at all. All I’m seeing is a Wipeout logo and a ROBLOX character. I’d suggest making an ad yourself or hire a graphic designer/2d artist that will feature the best parts of your game instead of this. Ask yourself, What part of your game would be eye-catching? What would I click on? Make an ad so great that people who don’t normally click on ads; click on it.

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#28

Can’t tell what the avatar in the ad is it took me a few seconds to recognize that it was even a avatar and people don’t stop to see your ad so I suggest putting more red in it to grasp the attention of a player

#29

The ad looks good, however i won’t click it. I don’t like ad which promote people or YouTube-channels and stuff.