hello, im cqulix! im looking for some feedback on a shirt i recently made. i really enjoyed making this piece. i want to know what the community would want to see different, and if you would wear this! thanks for any tips
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Amazing work! Is there a link to this Shirt? You should make different colours!
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i have some pants! they are not the best with this outfit. i van pm you though?
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Sure, you can post the pants anyways! No need to be ashamed, chances are the pants are amazing as well!
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This is a great shirt! I like how you put wrinkles, but here are some things you could improve.
- Add more drop shadow for the collar! I can see that there’s a little bit, but maybe blur a bit more and darken it.
- The wrinkles look kind of scattered. This can be fixed by looking at a reference, such as this messy one I made.
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With breast shading (breasts are referenced for educational purposes)
Without breast shading (breasts are referenced for educational purposes)
- You could also add some more textures, such as noise and overlays. There are good ones on google and Pinterest.
- Maybe a graphic on the sweater? That’s just my personal preference though.
Overall, great shirt! You should post the pants too.
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Looks very formal. And i love how the white compliments the yellow great colors you picked out.
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Thanks! I decided not to add the graphic that was on this shirt but I do have a graphic shirt on my portfolio! Thanks for the feedback!
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I thought it would be a nice touch!