It’s a very well put together game, but it needs some sense of direction. I got lost at the railroads and ended up quitting after 10 minutes of just walking around trying to figure out where the game ends. Also, the railroads seemed really big. There’s literally no train that could fit on those rails 
. With all jokes and criticism aside, it’s a well balanced horror game with a sense of mystery and eeriness. Coming from a builders perspective, I would give it an 8/10 
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Thank you! I will work on the directional part of the game, I realise it is confusing.
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Maybe make a running system and the breathing should be after you run out of stamina.
I don’t know, I kind of want it to seem that your out of breathe and running through the tunnels. At the moment, I am making UI to make it seem like this is the case.
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Very nice and eerie horror game, I love these types of games! As some one else said however, it was easy to get lost. Maybe add a little bit more light?
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Me and my friend are just discussing adding a Map to the game.
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Update:
Added text for Directions
You get teleported somewhere at the end of the game, but I am not saying how.
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It is really nice, these are my thoughts:
Negative thoughts:
The only negative thought I had has been fixed, so I have no negative thoughts.
Positive thoughts:
It gives a realistic, spooky vibe which makes it much better.
It is very dark so you have a proper reason for the flashlight.
You changed the mouse cursor.
Addition:
this is all my opinion and I think this is great.
Well done! 
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I found Mr. Beast! 
Jokes aside, I think your build looks very nice!
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This is my comment: Nice and creepy 
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For the negative thoughts, I didn’t really think anyone would notice that. Honestly, that was there since the very beginning of the build and yeah, I should change it. Thank you for the Positive thoughts, it means a lot.
Edit, I have removed peasant from the Mr Beast poster.
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Big money man Mr Beast is everywhere nowadays.
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No problem! I enjoyed playing your build!
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Im jealous of him on one side when I look at the signboard of his picture, he’ll be like here take all of this bobux for free
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If only he would give me 1 million bobux.
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Going to be starting work on the next game next week.
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I have finally managed to sort out the teleporting issue on the game, it should now work flawlessly 
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I WANT MY MOMMY WAAAAH
Anyway, good job! It scared the heck out of me! Honestly, I was really scared which is a good thing in horror games! Keep up the good woork…
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Everything flows so nicely.
The lighting, amazing building and sound effects come together to make this a brilliant game!
However, it’s the middle of the night at the moment, making it even more erie, so I might revisit it in the day-time when I have the nerve.
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Okay, thank you for visiting and saying such nice things.
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