This is my updated version of a title screen I have been working on for a while:
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Mostly want feedback on what you like the most or things you don’t like,
(My favorite thing is the animated vegetation)
I like the overall feel of it. The only thing I don’t like is how the character doesn’t have an animation.
You could make it move back and forth slightly and look at the sword every once in a while.
This aesthetic loading screen looks great! Nice job on it! How long did it take to make? Will you use it in anything?
Took about 2 days to make, might use it in an rpg game.
This title screen makes me want to keep living
The environment is good but I think the character is too bright.
Maybe there should be only 1 object in the center. The sword in the character’s hand I think would look better (both located where the sword is).
Hmmm. I will consider centering the character-- I already lowered the brightness a while ago. (video is slightly outdated)