hello, I made a title screen for my game, and want some feedback.
I took a lot of inspiration from this title screen (Title screen)
I think mine looks decent, but want feedback, thanks!
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I love how you got your inspiration from me! Your design is nice but should have some changes, some of the reasons on why I think mine is nice is mostly because of the details on the map. Yours looks more plain and only has rocks/mini mountains. I would add vines, trees, or even some plants. Maybe even consider updating the UI to give it a nicer finish.
Other than that it’s great!
Edit (don’t always get inspiration from other UI. You can still make simulator UI but try to make your own style)
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ohh hii!!
I hope you don’t mind me doing this, do you?
i did actually add this stuff too! thanks for suggesting this!
thanks for telling me this!
also here is the updated version if you wanted to see:
thank you for all the feedback 
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I know the coins are placed in their spots purposely, but it still looks a bit wrong. Maybe make it symmetrical and in line or have them falling down like rain?
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Oops i thought i was replying for a different post in my last reply lol
i like this idea!!
i might do that, Thanks!
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Maybe play the idle animation.
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There is no idle animation. I will make one though.
Thanks!
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A single coin is a bit odd
Yeah this is perfect
You should have added them close to the focus and on higher amount
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Should I have multiple? I think the raining down is good, but I already have particle effects…
Thank you for feedback!!
Then just add multiple, yeah.
Oh, and put the avatar on a pose
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This title screen looks good! It’s fairly basic, but it does its job! How long did it take to make this title screen?
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Thank you for the positive feedback!
it took about 1 hour (thats with scripting included)
(also, i have made a lot of improvements to it since the last video, so it looks better now)
not that the game title looks bad, but designing it in an external software would probably make it stand out more.
also, i recommend you make the game title larger in size as compared to the play button.
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what do you mean, how would i do this?
also the game title is larger than the play button.
(im gonna link a new video here and give your opinion on that, because i forgor i updated it)
note: this is for a simulator game, so that’s why it looks cartoony.
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use a drawing software, maybe like Photoshop, or a UI design software like Figma. design the logo in that itself. export it as an image and import it into Roblox. this will help it stand out more, and also makes sure it scales properly with other devices
i do like the menu screen, but I think you should decorate the rocks with moss, flowers and various paraphernalia
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Woww I too have kinda same but serious for my parkour game. Really nice done
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