Not all features are final, content is subject to change
Lore
You are in Robloxia, a vast land of many different biomes, people, and cultures. Recently, two large groups known as the Knights of Redcliff and Overseers started to fight over territories. Robloxia was split in two, and as an assassin for hire, you can make some serious profit, or fall and be forgotten.
Gamemodes
There will be two gamemodes to choose from in the lobby place, Story Mode and Multiplayer Mode. In Story Mode, you can explore the war in Robloxia in a guided story with quests. In Multiplayer Mode, you can PVP with others, and explore the exact same world as Story Mode without having to follow a storyline.
Credits
thatguylikepizza - Scripting, project lead, a bit of modelling
EctonNoLimit - UI, some modelling
PizzaArmy333 - Storyline director, marketing
SireHDFury - Animation
You’ve got a good game idea and you have a set concept as well as the game planned out. That’s good, and that’s a start.
Now, for success, in my opinion, we will see. This seems like its going to be a fairly optimized and well thought out game. However, what I think might happen is, the game is too complex. Now, I would rate this an 8/10 concept in general because I think you know what the game is gonna feel like, and its a somewhat creative concept too. However, I do think it might be a little bit too complex for a majority of the platform.
And in my mind, that is okay, as the community has seen some more complex games which do capture an group of players. It might not be as big as a general game on Roblox, however it could capture a certain group of players if you optimize it well, think out the mechanics, and polish it properly.
As for the age rating, I think 9+ is reasonable given while there is no blood and gore, there is still violence involved in the game.
Overall, I have to say that it does have some potential, but you have to be very precise with what you do.
The ui is quite big and the menu screen takes up the entire screen. there is no equal distance between each edge and between each element. The font is crap. the design you choose is also quite bad
well the game is yours isnt it? so tell the ui designer to make a good ui. I can literally make a 100x improved ui in like 1 day. Tell the things i told you above to the ui designer and please tell him to take some inspiration.
