Club game GFX PT. 2 Feedback

This is a continuation of my previous club post, this is the 2nd out of 5 GFXs I’m commissioned for. I used much of the feedback from my previous post; such as reducing the light & saturation. If you have any feedback that I can use for my next GFX I’d appreciate it.
(Software used: Blender, Lightroom, Photoshop)

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Its, it’s… Amazing…

Astonishing work!

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Here’s the timeline aswell throughout the stages!

Looks amazing!

The only tip I have is that you cant really read the small letters but still looks amazing!

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Pretty good gfx, only issue is that you cant really read the small letters, maybe try adding a bit of shadow to them.

Edit: idk much about gfx, i am not sure how the shadow would look its just my personal opinion

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I wanted to move the “A past future experience” above the “ALTITUDE” however I talked with the owner and they liked it under more.
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It’s actually pretty stunning, maybe u can lower the glow on the text, as for me it’s kinda unreadable.