Could I get some feedback on my song?

I made a chill song for the game Fisch ([NEW] Fisch - Roblox), and I wanted to know how you guys think it sounds.

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  • Perfect, my ears have never reached this state of nirvana. :heart_eyes:
  • This is pretty good and chill. :sunglasses:
  • Decent. :neutral_face:
  • Bad. :confounded:
  • MY EARS ARE BLEEDING!!! HELP! :dizzy_face:

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It would also be nice if you gave me some specific feedback in the comments.

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i’m glad that all 2 of us agree that this is a banger

edit: nevermind… i accidentally killed someone with my music

It sounds nice and calming, very fitting vibe for the fisching game. (awesome game btw)

Though, I do think the song sounds like it’s coming from a radio or speaker. Messing with the EQ might fix that, but it could just be the guitar specifically or my ears.

That was actually a stylistic choice to convey nostalgia, but if it’s irritating I can change it.

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There you go, I removed the filter making it sound like that.

Sorry, it wasn’t irritating, just noticed it and wasn’t sure if it was intentional. After listening to it again, I think I like both directions. :sweat_smile:

It’s fine, I like the version without the radio filter tons better.

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Its a good song. Its just a bit repetitive. I think you should throw some light cello or violin about 20 seconds in.

Okay, it has been changed. Sadly, I don’t know what to do about the repetitiveness, though.

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It sounds great, but I do agree that it feels a bit repetitive. I think shortening the pauses would help. Again, it was a lovely song!

It improved. Its not as repetitive and I think it’s nice!

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The only thing I could say is maybe eq some of the high frequencies out of the guitar sound. All of the other sounds are softer which makes it sound a little bit harsh. Just my opinion though

This song is actually decent but as I said in my other post you should mess around with other instruments


(that was for your other one, but some of it applies here)

Also the thing where it slides from one ear to another is cool and all but it gets weird and annoying after a while and if its at high volume (but not too high, just high enough its a bit loud so u can vibe) it actually makes my ears feel weird