Hello,
Me and my group are currently working on a game called “Falklands War” in which you have to capture points and fight against the other team
Here is the new icon with the corrections:
The thumbnail:
What do you think about it?
The thumbnail:
What do you think about it?
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It isnt good, because:
A) the character is in a weird pose
B) The font isn’t thick, make it way more bold.
fix that, then it be better
also make character holding gun, and shooting
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Okay, thank you for the feedback - I will try to fix the issues
I like it, but it is a bit bland. I would recommend putting a bit more detail in it. :)’
Hope this helps!
-Slime
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:). Im glad it helps! Btw besides what i said it was amazing!
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the character really stands out and i love it but i have to agree with @AwakenedElemental but i dont think it necessarily needs to hold a gun
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but it doesn’t really show whats happening, like you can see destroyed stuff, and trees, but he looks weird, and just looks like he’s just standing there with an angry face
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i did agree that the pose looks weird also i kinda agree with you now he should be holding a gun but just holding it
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yeah, just holding it. i guess.
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Ah, yes! Great!
But the font needs to be way bolder. The fire is literally cutting into the ground.
Here’s a font I suggest for your genre: PROGRESS Font | Billy Argel Fonts | FontSpace (download that font and use it)
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It looks great so far! I love the shading, however, the font is a little too bland. The font could use a shadow or a bold effect on them. There could be more detail on the GFX, but the font is the only one that really doesn’t look right. Love it! <3
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Oooo!!! Way more appealing! Mcu better much better!
Now, just add an outline!
Also add some other people maybe (optionally)?
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Okay, thank you very much! To what should I add an outline?
the entire logo/icon, of course!
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I really like how the character stands out. I also like the location where the character is. I overall like the game icon, although there’s several issues with it. One of the issues is the gun’s metal parts, it gives off the wrong texture. Another issue is with the helmet, there’s no texture on it at all. At least a few scratches on the helmet would make it look so much better. The last issue I saw was the part of the smoke closest to the flames. It stands out too much and the grayer parts of the smoke should be slightly darker.
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