Feeback on my Underwater Restaurant

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#21

Absolutely stunning, great use of lighting and I adore the chair meshes!

Slightly script based but having some animals swimming around would be super awesome!

And, Is calamari on the menu?

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#22

I actually made that chair with parts as I don’t know how to use blender rip. Btw, love the plaza idea, will deffently try and co e up with a fitting design at some point.

#23

Oof, you’re right, I might need to start working on the different dishes.

#24

I love this! This is an amazing idea, but I do have some suggestions to help improve it.

  • Try and add some ocean features, you only need to include it inside with the glass windows to give it a better look overall. This could be scripted sea creatures like fish, whales, dolphins, sharks, jellyfish, etc. You could also include rocks, the reef, holes, etc.

  • Improve the lighting, yes it looks amazing in the darkness, but having a little of light too wouldn’t hurt. But, you can always test it out to see what looks best.

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#25

This is amazing! The massive amount of detail you put into this has surely paid off. Great work! :+1:

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#26

Its really nice and a great idea, you could add some sea life outside that window, Seaweed, corals, etc…

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#27

I think you should add a aquarium area where people could go and see fishes!
Great build.

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#28

Very nice, I believe you should maybe make the flooring a nice marble, detail the lights a bit more and maybe make the seating a nice metalic look? or maybe adding things onto the table like cloths, flours and so forth?

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#29

It’s an odd place to put a restaurant! :joy:

Maybe try to add trees or rocks on the spawn area? If you can, add wildlife outside the window too.

Great build!

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#30

Extremely nice showcase. How did you get realistic rocks like that? Are they meshes or did you use a plugin or something to make them if you don’t mind me asking?

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#31

I believe he made them in Blender @S1xty

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#32

I have placed some mooving fish outside the window but so many say I should add it that I may need to double check it. And yeah it’s not where a restaurant is suppost to go by any means haha.

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#33

Yeah so everything is made on studio and I would say the most usfull plugin would be “part to terrain”, without that I would not be able to remove the water with detail.

#34

you mind find these useful.
https://www.roblox.com/library/2967983417/Lolaphobias-Rock-Mesh-Pack
https://www.roblox.com/library/1412691134/CorrivalRhymes-Mega-Nature-Essentials-Pack

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#35

Lovely game! One tiny suggestion: The music will stop (assuming it’s because the song is finished) and it’s kind of a bit jarring? Maybe find a way to have the song loop a bit better or have it where it can fade into it looping?

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#36

It looks amazing, Although you could add more scenery at spawn to leave a “good first join impression” for the games, that being said I believe amazing, keep building, I would love to support your places.

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#37

hey, i saw your showcase and i really really like the simplicity and cohesiveness in the build :).

a few words of advice from me;

  1. this fish is a cool idea however he likes to just float in the air inside the restaurant and it’s very jarring :(. would either recommend removing him or implementing him in a way so that he doesnt do this.

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  2. my other tip is that i think you could spice up the outside lighting a bit. after all, the outside is the first thing you see in a bit so it sets a first impression!
    i’d recommend three things to spice it up a little. firstly, increase the bloom threshold a little bit and lower the size. it may not be noticable for most people, but on my fully white avatar it definitely shows it is too much! secondly, under the lighting setting where it says shadow softness, lower that to 0. this will make the shadows emitted by everything a lot more crisp and realistic and i think thatll work very well for your modern style! lastly, i’d give the build a slightly orange/white colorshift_top to make the outside feel slightly warmer.

for more tips on lighting, check out my post about it here:

thank you! :v:

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#38

Thank you so much, I will defently play around with the lighting abit as you said, and I would need to find a scripter to fix this with the fishes as I’m not the best at it myself.

#39

What I think
Overall, I love the build. It is something rather unique that I have not seen before. I can’t really criticise this build due to how good it is.

What you have done well

  • Amazing lighting, great depth

  • Very realistic water

  • The restaurant itself is realistic, the texture is great

  • The terrain is great

  • The furniture is realistic

What a great build

10/10

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#40

Amazing build you’ve got here, Definetely seems like you’ve paid a lot of passion, time and work to it! You’ll get to the top someday if you keep working hard. But most importantly, you must have fun doing whatever you’re planning to! Never do something and feel forced about it. :slight_smile:

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