Feed back on my melody

The ones that I did’nt download are bad the other I download or ok and sometimes good.

And ik it isn’t desert music, I was just showing you how beepbox was able to balance the sound. If you notice, the sitar is louder than the background stuff

I can turn down the volume and I am gonna make the whole. Song right now.

Increase the sound of the higher part, but decrease everything else

I know no ones gonna take it. So do not worry

Just in case there was the one person who toke my music once.

Add your watermark. Art has it, and so does music. Make a robot voice say ur username

That cymbal-like percussion thing sounds bad on the first beat of the melody. Maybe move it after the melody finishes. The rest is great.

Wouldn’t that sound the same when it loops?

Well if you play the drums like I do usually after the four or what ever measure mine is 7 you play a cymbal on the first beat on the first measure.

The dun-dun-dun part gets a little annoying, maybe turn that down a little bit so it doesn’t detract from the melody. Otherwise, it sounds awesome!

The high pitch flute sound thing?

The harpsichord/clavichord/guitar

That is the melody. Or are you talking about the guitar?

The guitar thing. The flute is fine, isn’t that supposed to be the melody?

It’s like a side thing. There are three of the same instrument playing the same thing.

It’s kind of loud for a side thing, so probably turn it down a little bit.

Well when I actually make the song that part is going to be the main melody for the verse.

Oh, so the flute isn’t part of the song tones. Idk, maybe it’s just me that finds the guitar repetitive. But good work on the music!

I can vibe to the melody on a suitable game all day, and the soundtrack is just catchy. What I’m attempting to state is that this soundtrack is good and would fit to a horror/heroic game.