Feedback about a Military Barracks I made

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#1

Hey guys! This is my first forum post!

Question:
How do you guys think on my barracks? What should be added to make it look better?
Is the lighting ok?

Picture:

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Notes:
Please criticise! I won’t be offended.
CHANGES HAVE BEEN MADE SINCE THIS POST WAS POSTED! NEW POST ABOUT IT LATER.

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#2

Great start on your build! The lighting is cool, and as a recommendation, you might want to add more inventory to the barracks, including fighting dummies, posters if you want, and possibly more lockers. Either way, the overall build looks good.

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#3

This place looks very plain. I suggest adding a square under every bed to make each bed ‘tile’ stand out more. And maybe add some support beams along the walls and some in the middle of the room.

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#4

It is really bland, also the wall texture doesn’t fit at all, you could add some lights, chairs, tables, pillars etc.

#5

Thanks! I’ll see about adding more inventory. The dummies are not needed, as well, uh, i should’ve said its apart of a base lol. Anyways, the dummies are in a shooting range.
Posters, mght make it look better.

#6

@Dolphin_Worm I think its pretty good considering he just joined the devforum yesterday.
Great Job @VaderGoalie !!

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#7

Thanks! the walls looked like it fitted at first, but now that you say that, i see that it doesn’t fit as well as it did earlier.

#8

Thanks! I’ll try that. Your tile idea sounds great!

#9

Some suggestions:

  • The beds are spaced too far apart and they’re too slender
  • You should add bunk beds as they look more appropriate in a place which serves as an accommodation for a large number of people
  • Add textures and more stuff to the walls, maybe some posters or pictures.
  • Add tables and chairs. You can make the make them slightly disordered so that it conveys a more untidy feeling.
  • Maybe add some desks next to some of the beds.
  • The white storage closets (I’m assuming that’s what they are) should be taller
  • The room is too spacious. Maybe you can make the room slightly smaller and add more furniture so as to get rid of the empty space.
  • Table lamps/ Computers would be good too.
  • The roof texture looks way too bland. Add some lights and other stuff to make it look better.
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#10

@BaggyChris I agree that its not bad for a first attempt but joining the dev forum yesterday does not necessarily mean he started building yesterday :joy: .

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#11

Thank for your feedback! i’ll take that into recommendation.

Those are actually lockers.

#12

Oh right, my bad :sweat_smile:.
They’d still look better if they’re taller tho.

#13

I’m going to be honest: I it is WAY to big. Please make the proportions more reasonable. Also, the single beds aren’t common for military barracks. They usually have bunk beds. Also, please add windows. :upside_down_face:

#14

Its not too big it just needs more decor like night stands next to the beds.

#15

First of all, welcome to the devforum, glad to have you here. :slight_smile:

Second off, this is pretty good! Great work. :slight_smile:

#16

First. Its from a corner view, but its not big. Second, im going off of the USAF beds (i should’ve said that before), its not exact, but i don’t really want bunk beds. And no point in windows, as you would just be looking at the garage next door and on the other side is the meeting center,

#17

Oh, you’re going off the USAF beds… Ok. To me, it looks quite big, and that’s my opinion.

#18

Thats becuase we still have not added uniforms and stuff, and tbh its really not that big. its abit small actually. The camera was in a far corner and near the roof so i guess that whats make s it look big?

#19

It’s a great start, but it could use some bunk beds, footlockers and just more stuff. It feels super empty.

#20

Those white things in the center? those are the lockers. Bunk beds? No. Im going off of USAF beds. More stuff? yes, my partners are currently making uniforms and gear.