[Feedback] Café Build

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#1

Hello there, after my first café build I noticed an image in the comments by @TedArthur here is that image:

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So, I decided to rebuild it in ROBLOX:

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Please tell me what you think of it, Thanks. :smiley:

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#2

Hi there,

You did a great job in replicating, but not copying, @TedArthur’s design! Additionally, the café looks very nice from every angle.

Just a couple of things though:

Although it’s not part of the physical build, the sun rays in a couple of images are quite overpowering and they’re downright opaque. Try toning them down a bit by making them less bright and more transparent.

Also, the inside of the café looks good for the most part, but it looks very empty. Try adding more furniture like plant decorations and lights.

Apart from that, the build is extremely pleasing to the eye!
Hope the feedback helps!

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#3

Okay, @TedArthur found this on google it was not a build.

I noticed what you meant by the sun rays that why when I was taking photos on some it’s turned off.

I will add more items to the interior

Like you said it does look very empty.

Thanks for the feedback!

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#4

Wow! Very nice build, I hope to see more of these in the future! :grinning:

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#6

I personally think this is an amazing build and I see potential with you making this a cafe game. I’d just recommend adding decorations such as lamps or mini fountains such as the one below. Other than that this is an amazing build. Keep up the good work! You should add something like this picture with some LED lighting to make a nice atmosphere with it.

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#7

That looks really cool, thanks for the feedback.
I will add that!

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#8

one word for this build:

P U R E

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#10

Hello!

Pretty good building and continue with the amazing work.
But there is just two things I want to point up that I didnt really like:

1: The walls are curved and rotated for some reason when In the original image they are straight .
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2: The back part is pretty empty on my opinion.
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But excluding those things I really liked the building and pls finish the interior because that could look very good! Goodbye.

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#11

Oh, I didn’t realise it was tilted on the image lol

Yeah, I could do some more to the back tbh

Thanks for the feedback!

#12

Looks amazing and I don’t even know what should I say for Feedback.

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#13

Looks amazing I adore it But the inside looks kinda bland maybe add some vegetation maybe show some of the food

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but overall it looks very good!

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#15

It looks blurry because of the blur effect.