Feedback for Demo Lobby Wanted!

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#1

IMPORTANT! The game: Precarious Island Demo Lobby - Roblox
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Precarious Island description: You’re stuck on an island with extremely limited resources, the boat you arrived with sank when things started going downhill. The crew calls for several helicopters to come rescue survivors. Now you must survive until they arrive.

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Change log:

  • Added butterflies
  • Changed the hut style of roofing
  • Added trees
  • Changed the depth of field
  • Added a window and supports to the hut
  • Made the poles darker
  • Changed the style of the donation board
  • Changed the lighting
  • Changed tree leaves to be affected by wind
  • Changed signs to be more visible
  • Changed the barriers in the shop
  • Fixed Z-Fighting in the shop
  • Changed planks to align with the supports
  • Fixed being able to escape the map
  • Changed the cove to be deeper so that you are unable to see the sky
  • Changed the colour of the hut’s supports
  • Added a bridge to one of the islands
  • Changed the gazebo style of roofing
  • Changed the footstep sound cooldown from 0.5 to 0.43 (near perfect)
  • Fixed the beach ball animation
  • Added a rope for the boat
  • Added a load screen
  • Added the TTHKKB NPC
  • Added realism to the poles and towel
  • Changed the default idle animation to the Rthro idle animation
  • Changed certain parts to be beveled
  • Changed the leaderboard area materials and colours
  • Fixed the sign shelters
  • Changed the footstep sound’s volume to be quieter
  • Changed some wood’s colours to be darker
  • Added an Easter Egg
  • Added a game icon and thumbnail
  • Changed the letters to be spaced out more
  • Changed the shopkeeper’s animation to be smoother
  • Changed the walkspeed from 7 to 7.3
  • Added a VIP gamepass. This gamepass gives you access to two gears, a radio and a VIP sign, and an area only VIP can access
  • Fixed the leaderboard
  • Fixed some more Z-fighting
  • Changed windows from glass to smooth plastic so you can see outside particles and water
  • Changed lighting to future and fixed up some lights (done mostly by @FxllenCode, thank you!)
  • Changed the tic tac toe board

Working on the shelter for the guitarist!

NOTE THAT FREE MODELS ARE SUBJECT TO CHANGE!

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#3

Talked in game, discussed adding wildlife. Looks great.

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#4

I have before, but it didn’t work out well, I’ll just make it take longer :slight_smile: thanks for your feedback
(It also respawns when you die, also none of the scripts are made by me, they’re all tweaked, but focus on the build, not the scripts)
Thanks a lot for the wildlife feedback!

#5

Looks okay, small details could be added. Planks could be misplaced or something of the sort. I’m not sure why you’d build a dock like house when it’s a place stuck in water haha. The game has a bit too much blur and the lobby looks a bit bland, I think the players would get a bit bored. Hope this helped

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#6

This is super good! Love the calming colors and water, also the detail.

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#7

Wait, the blur is public? Like, the depthoffield?

#8

yeah thats what I meant, reduce it or get rid it of it takes away from the beauty of the build :smiley:

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#9

Oh, I can’t see it myself :stuck_out_tongue: must not be 100% public yet
(fixed blur and housish structure lol)

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#10

Demo? Someone called?

Just kidding, this looks really nice. Good job! :smiley:

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#11

Haha, thanks Demo :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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#12

Thank you for your feedback :slight_smile:

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#13

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Looks a bit bland now (but a lot better) any ideas?

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#14

Add some darker colored wood going up the wall so it looks like it has a little more support.

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#15

Mind if you draw a simple diagram for my simple mind?

#16

Alright, don’t expect the example to look good though.

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#17

The black lines are pillars going up the wall so it makes it look like it has some support, try it out in studio!

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#18

Ooh looks nice, will do :slight_smile:

#20

Looks extremely crowded, and boring, you can add more details and expand it.

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#21

Crowded? Details, sure, but how can it lack details and be crowded?
And I want suggestions for details, not to be told it lacks details lol

#22

I’m really, really struggling to find something that I can constructively criticise about this build, I’m just stunned. It looks amazing. But I somehow found just 1 thing that would make the build perfect, if you put the donation board under some sort of shelter, it’d look even better!

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