My eyes are dieing the lights are so bright please turn them down and add more decor 
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Pros: Nice for a beginner cafe, good models.
Cons: Lighting, empty space.
Overall I say 8.5/10
Good job!
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Very cool, I suggest adding more color and vibrance, it is very bland. Also maybe add more thing inside, most of it is empty space.
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Here’s some things you can improve on:
- A sign would be good, like ‘XYZ’s Cafe’. Use 3D Text for this.
- Color, not just white. Stick to a similar color palette and not opposites like blue and green… plus, lighting is too bright and there are no actual lights.
- It feels very open and large, you should add something in the middle of the floor, more chairs (or carpet, ads, donations, statue, fireplace…)
- The door is too small, especially in comparison to the large windows.
- Add queue dividers
- Everything seems blocky or chunky, like the glass in the last pic. Use small increments. I’d use blender or find a free model of a torus and use that. Also, you could benefit from a kitchen instead of showing off a total of 4 donuts and 1 cup + 1 glass in the whole cafe.
- The chair seat is sticking out a little and is a little bit too thin, plus the legs holding the table look odd. A singular metal rod would do.
Overall, you could use work on it. More design, ads, color and life. You could be imaginative and add a VIP lounge or an overlooking balcony. Use reference images to accomplish what you want to achieve. G’luck.
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There’s way too much white. Maybe try to mix up the colors and try to experiment with different materials especially for the flooring.
Also, never use F3X for lighting. F3X is mainly for the building not for lighting. So, try to use studio tools when it comes to lighting.
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the decoration is fine, but the color white make it looks so bright. my eyes are hurting when I am looking at the picture.
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Its awesome but it is way to bright.
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It’s too bright, also you should design an inside and an outside area.
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I like it, but there should be more tables and chairs, not like only six of them, 3 on one side and 3 on the other side, put some tables in the middle please lol
also here is another thing, why is it so eye piercingly bright, it’s like im in heaven already!
Here’s my last problem, don’t make the roof just straight, make a roof thats not just an incredibly straight block.
That’s it! Everything else is great, there are just those minor problems though that could easily be fixed!
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The Cafe looks great, however I would suggest either making the cafe smaller or adding something to get rid of that vast empty space that we have an obvious view of. It looks great, but I would recommend adding more color and changing the frame up overall. It’s also very bright, I’ll just say that.
That’s all I have for feedback, but otherwise good job!
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Forgot to mention, the cafe is not finished yet. Sorry that I didn’t say that in the beginning, LOL. Also, yeah I know the lighting is bad because I felt like there’s some problems already with the lighting when I was building this. Sorry for making you guys’ eyes bleed. 
Hey! Looking good so far, what I suggest you do to ensure the cafe feels less empty (I understand it isn’t finished yet) is that you could add walls in that section off certain areas or the cafe, or add in decorative pillars! These do wonders to create an appealing, and realistic, environment. Have a look at some other cafe games if you want some more ideas. Good luck! 
I think this looks great, but most things are white, but in general, it looks great!
I think you should add more colors to your cafe because most things are white.
For your first cafe, not bad! There are some problems including brightness, since the build is a bit bright… and if you get ton of experience, maybe change the style of chair and models, as my recommandation.
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I wanted to build the chair into this style in the beginning:
But I couldn’t figure out how to build it like that, so I made the chair kinda basic. Do you know how I can build the chair into like the style in the picture above?
First of all, the legs of the chair is pretty easy with a few parts like this, but if you like a tutorial, here’s what I found:
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Had I not read the title of the post, I would have thought this was a model of the Apple Store. Make a less-straight ceiling, less lighting, and more color contrast besides white.
Overall Rating: 7.5/10 (nice build!)
LOL. Now that you’ve said that, it does look like a model of Apple Store! Don’t worry, I’ll improve.
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Fix the light. However the pastries and the food looks pretty cool. So well done!
Way too bright, the ceiling and walls are just rectangles maybe add exteriors other than that good job.