Hello.
Another showcase, which is for sure, simpler, but I stink it’s still pretty decent. What do you think about it? 
Time spent: around 2 hours.
Link: Dreams - Roblox
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Wow, just wow! Everything about this build looks fantastic! I love the lighting, the textures of the trees, the grass, and the temple itself. Keep up the good work!
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It looks very nice! Wow, it’s an amazing build! All I would have to say is that the rays are a bit too bright!
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“Decent”
Dude, it’s amazing. Keep up the good work!
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bruh u flex u dont need no feedback for this lol this is amazing tho gj! 
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It feels like things are missing. Possibly some sort of fancy pedestal in the center of the room. Also, you could google “greek pillar” and model the pillars after them. The indents and fancy designs would spruce it up a bit.
the lighting seemed a bit intense for me. also is the music supposed to not loop? that just kinda caught me off guard nothing too serious.
as far as the building goes, it is simple but it doesnt need to be any more detailed than it already is. the terrain seems a bit bland, i would of liked to see some rocks maybe sand in different places since it is an island.
overall very calming and peaceful showcase, definitely will check out what else you have to offer.
This showcase is insane, but you need make the Sky much cleaner than before because it looks dusty. 
Thanks, I’ll think about it.
Well, maybe lighting is a little bit intense, music should loop but I finished showcase when it like 1 AM, and, well… forgot to select looped, that’s all 
Also yeah, it feels bland. Like it was night so i only finished the temple and i didn’t really focus on terrain much. I’ll try to do something now. Cheers!
IT
IS AMAZING!!
You nailed the lighting on a whole new level.
And considering this all took you just 2 hours, This is a true mastery.
Structure can be improved though but again, this all took you just 2 hours so i am sure you can do that!
As i said, it was 1 AM so i was a little bit tired. I was focused on finishing temple. Now I’m decorating terrain with rocks, bushes, etc. And I’ll also change pillars.
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Cool build, but a few things annoy me a little.
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The top seems a little bit too heavy for those pillars to hold up.
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There are too many pillars imo.
What I like:
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I love the lighting
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The decal under the top is absolutely amazing.
Cool build overall except for those two things.
Good luck!
Changes
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Changed pillars (@Frenchtoast0 idea)
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Added sand (@inkwaves idea)
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Added rocks and more(@inkwaves idea)
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Also fixed music XD
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Changed skybox (@HASNPLAYZ it fits better with this lighting)
I think it’s better now
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The pillars could be more detailed with lines, which makes it ancient greek. Tho, you got approved feedback from a greek 
Nice work.
Oh just noticed you made adjustments to the pillagers. Great
Yeah, thanks for your opinion
That build makes me speechless
The fact that this only took you about 2 hours makes me wonder what can you achieve with more time 
Truly amazing!
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