hello! this is the improved version of the futuristic holding cells that I posted about before
all suggestions and feedback is welcome!
before:
now:
p.s only been building for 4 weeks
In the little time from your last post on this, to now, I can already see some major improvements! Great job! I only have one suggestion, I don’t remember if I had mentioned it before. I think putting some white neon or even blue behind some of the panels on the wall could further that sci-fi kind of feel. This is absolutely stunning and I can’t wait to see more about it!
Happy building!
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maybe yellow neon panels to go with the yellow bars, or I could change the bars to blue
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That was quite fast, I personally thought the neon yellow bars would look good with the blue. The color scheme is your choice though, I think it looks great! Keep it up!
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I only had to make a neon part and place is behind the panels then duplicate it.
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I like how you added more detail to match the image you were going for. Although, you may not agree with me, I don’t really think the neon matches the cell’s colours. You may want to change it to a different colour or scrap it completely.
Other than that, I love it. 
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the blue one or the yellow one?
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The one you had just shared above my post, with the blue outline. If you like it, feel free not to change it. But I don’t really think it matches.
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Howdy Crispey!
First off, congratulations on taking on building and succeeding!
I found this to be a very intriguing post. I would love to know if you’re using some ref. images for this project, what your inspiration is… just some more information! What is this for? 
A couple of suggestions on what I’ve observed:
Stick to one increment when it comes to the architecture/basic layout of a build and its noticeable details. For me, this is .25.
Use reference images,videos, music, etc. This helps drastically in my building process, so I hope it also helps with yours!
Lighting is the secret to your sauce. Use it to your advantage.
Cant wait to hear from you. 
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Hi!
Thank you for replying. I started this project after reading on devforum about someone making a futuristic prison, so I thought if I could do it, I also do have a reference image that I found surfing the web😁
Though I’m not trying to go into too much detail because I’m not really sure what to with it when I’m finished since I can’t script, so this is more of a learning project.
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Only a bit of time has passed since you made the last post and I can see major improvements. I am glad that you took my feedback into consideration about the floor design.
I would not really recommend this as it looks amazing just the way it is.
Probably go for yellow.
Hope to see the finished product!
I would go for the yellow bars. It looks very good, keep on the good work!
Maybe you can add some neon buttons (red and green) to open the cell, and make the bats blue. Overall it looks great!
I will be making panel that open up the cells, also I don’t have any bats?
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Bars* omg auto correct is cool bro…
I really like the changes! I think it looks a lot better with the added neon and blue scheme too. Consider adding the panels to open/close the doors - even if they aren’t scripted it’ll look good and add to the immersion!
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