Hi, I’m celiccs, an aspiring developer on the platform. I just wanted to see if anyone could give me general feedback on this cartoony/low poly craftsman style home I just finished and if there is any way I could possibly improve the build, as well as any tips for future builds I make. Thanks!
I like it a lot! Good job! There is nothing that you should really change in this.
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The window in the front of the house is a bit small, everything else looks really good.
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looks cool; is there a game link so I can see it better?
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Looks amazing! I suggest adding more detail in the yard but the house you made is 10/10!
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Looks very good! I like it a lot!
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Thank you! Apologies for not attaching the link in the original post, here it is…
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Thank you, very much appreciated! I would have done more yard work/detail but I don’t have very many assets at the moment unfortunately. However, I’m glad you think the home is amazing!
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The house it’s self looks outstanding. I think that adding some trees or plants around it would look amazing.
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Hey! The build looks great, and ! don’t really have any suggestions other then maybe adding another window in the front or making the current window bigger and to add a few details to the roof (maybe a couple bricks in similar shades to try and recreate shingles?). other then that it looks amazing! I think you could definitely go somewhere with your skills!
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This looks very good! if you make it a game can i have the link to it?
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Looks fantastic! Keep up the good work!
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yeah really cool, just needs a spot more detail, window box/flower basket/garden gnomes?few more bushes under the window? some trellis with a rose? maybe a fountain. anyway Great stuff keep it up!
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Wow! This is very cool!
I like how you have added the mowed grass effect for extra detail.
But as @PotatoVampire7797, @eqllas and @brvndqn had said it could do with a bit more detail like maybe a garden or a few trees with a swing, the porch could also have a few chairs and a table? The path could also have a low poly car parked there?
Besides that Its pretty good.
-From Cre8tor.
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wow, i love the low poly/cartoony building style. its got a good vibe, i really like it!
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Looks nice, maybe you can add some things like low-poly rocks and plants in the yard for some detail, or a car in the driveway.
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The house is perfectly built, but I feel like the lawn itself is empty.
I highly recommend adding decorations, including a mailbox, flamingo, a car at the driveway, a lawn mower, and boxes… you could add anything to your lawn, as long as its’ fits.
Either way, keep up the great work!
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Wow, amazing creation! I think it’s great as it is!
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