Hi! My name is celiccs. I made a post for feedback around 2 months ago [Feedback on a Cartoony Home], and if you responded to my initial post and are seeing this, I would just like to thank you for your tips! I have been working on acquiring some new assets, landscaping, lighting, and defining my style, and I just wanted to follow up and post some images of a new game I have been working on for a friend, and see if I can get any helpful tips or just suggestions about anything that I could use to improve the game in question and my future builds.
Not even gonna lie, for some reason, I’m IN LOVE with this build. However, there are some things I think you could improve on!
The map itself.
Most of the extra decorations are well made and placed, but I’ve noticed you are lacking some decorations. I don’t mean legitimate decorations, but more of things like garbage cans, bike racks, etc.
Landscaping.
The landscaping is phenomenal, to say the least, and it’s pretty much almost a perfect landscape. One thing I would do is add more trees.
The building.
There isn’t much to improve on when it comes to the building itself, but I think you should make the window frames a bit thicker, and add a door-window to the door to spice it up.
That’s all I can think of right now. Hope this helps!
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The lighting is like, the best I have ever seen for low poly (in Roblox) and it fits the style perfectly. However, like alxzile said, it could use some more decoration. How about bushes. rocks, and things. Otherwise, really really good.
