Feedback on a Japanese "Yari"

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#1

Hi there! My name is matthewthecowboy. I’ve recently modeled and textured this “Jumonji Yari” as a showcase piece for a portfolio (it’s not for roblox, but i believe it can be imported into roblox). I have tried to make the weapon resemble its real-life counterpart, but I’ve also added my own custom touches to the weapon. I textured it in Substance Painter and modeled it in Blender.

I’d really appreciate some constructive criticism on the weapon!

New Textures

Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Slanted view, for Artstation 06).PNG
Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Slanted view, for Artstation 06).PNG1920×1091 153 KB

Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Rendered with HDRI, for Artstation 05).PNG
Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Rendered with HDRI, for Artstation 05).PNG1235×1103 40.9 KB

Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Bottom close-up, for Artstation, 04)
Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Bottom close-up, for Artstation, 04)705×832 282 KB

Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Text close-up, for Artstation 03).PNG
Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Text close-up, for Artstation 03).PNG675×877 33.7 KB

Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Textured close-up, for Artstation 02)
Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Textured close-up, for Artstation 02)749×1018 351 KB

Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Substance Painter Texture view 02)
Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Substance Painter Texture view 02)637×885 116 KB

Old textures

Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Substance Painter Texture view 01)
Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Substance Painter Texture view 01)875×623 91.4 KB

Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Textured Side view)
Japanese Jumonji-blade Yari (Textured Side view)1900×751 561 KB

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#2

Both the new and old textures look really nice.

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#3

Looks cool 8/10. Might be good for anime games maybe.

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#4

Thanks for the feedback! Is there anything I could improve, perhaps? (Do note that this is not aimed for any roblox game, and is simply a showcase piece)