Feedback on abandoned town

Hello, I’ve been working on Left Behind [My Story game] And it will have PVP mode, and I’ve made a town like this [I edited free models and made them look abandoned]


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How can I make it better?

I don’t think there needs to be any improvements.
But still I guess the roads could be improved.

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If you’re going for a truly abandoned town, I would say add more foliage around the roads and sidewalks, it just looks like an evacuated town instead with what you have. It don’t look that too bad right now though, good work :wink:

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It is meant to be evacuated town due to a virus.
[nothing to do with corona - started working on the game in december 2019]

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Ah, that makes more sense. Then if that’s the case you could always add some items strewn about as if to make it seem like whoever were evacuating did it in a hurry- say luggage or clothes. Plus it being so recent, the crashed helicopter could do with a fire or some other things also around it, like the pilot or whatever. Can’t wait to see what it’ll become like!

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The heli crashed in the story around 2 yrs ago [story mode]

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Would’ve been better if I had known that before, but alright. If it was that long ago since that helicopter was there, it would make more sense for shrubbery and plant-life to take over the roads and homes, yeah? It’s your choice if you want to put that in there though, I’m not too sure how to put that kind of stuff in that well so I’d understand if that’s too ambitious.

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image Something like this?

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Yes! That’s a good start, if you could also find some vines growing down the sides of it too that would be great too. Usually you’d see that growing on certain brick homes and metal sidings, so yeah that definitely works with what you have.

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image Like this?

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This also works well, it could come off the top hanging off too- but this is definitely nice.

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Also, when a heli crashes what will happen to people inside it on impact?

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They could have been thrown out of the windows of the helicopter, or if standing near the doors through that way too. Plus since it’s been two years as you said, they’d be skeletons, almost bleached at this point.

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The game’s a story game like The last of us, And thanks for explaining :3

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Should the skeletons have some kind of moss on them?

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Aye, sounds good. No problem dude!

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The plants could grow over them, like as if they were being buried under dirt and grass.

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Like this?

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That definitely works, yes. It looks like the grass is coming through the skeleton through the eyes as well, I like that.

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