Feedback On Another WIP Showcase

While I am working on my other showcase I have posted about before, I am also working on this showcase called “Ancient Temple”. I couldn’t really think of a proper name for it xd. Anyways, how do you think it was? I didn’t really get the time to do much terrain work on it but I did some terrain colouring and lighting controls. The trees in this game are not mine. Put on max graphics and high or middle volume for the best experience.

Link: Ancient Temple - Roblox

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I love the feel of the trees moving in the wind, the smooth lighting, smooth shadows, and the art put into this. I understand that the build isn’t huge but it has character. Plus, the game has no lag (or I just didn’t experience any lag).

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I like the first picture, I think the second one needs bit more color and detail and then it would be awesome!

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Low detail. bright colors. Bad texture usage. Plain.

Increase the detailing in pillars and roof

Remove that neon. Its horrendous.

Slate isnt the only texture available. Experiment some.

Add more props around. Its very plain and empty.

Like I said, the terrain isn’t fully complete.

Which neon parts? (The neon on the swords, neon podium, neon on the orb?)