Feedback on first terrain and cabin

Hello.
This is my first terrain.
I also made a cabin to go with it.
Feedback is appreciated on both the cabin and the terrain.


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Your cabin looks very nice! Maybe a few more windows?

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Looks pretty good. Maybe add some features that show someone might have lived there. Maybe some tools leaned up against it or hanging outside on the way.

Also the porch looks a bit off without a railing on it. Other than that and what has been said before about possibly more windows, I think it looks pretty good! Great job!

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The grass terrain, excellent. It looks natural, well carves and great. The lighting too is excellent.

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Have you seen a pond like that? Flatten it out so it does not go against the laws of reality.

Love the lighting and the aesthetic but the curtain could use some work.

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The colours contrast pretty heavily. Make them either harmonious or complementary.

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I didn’t notice the pond issue lol.
Thanks for pointing all that out.

The lighting looks very good! However the curtain needs some improvements or should be removed.

I’d make that piece of wood on the roof a log

I like the inside, but the outside is too bland and try adding rock/dirt terrain around the lake/pond. Maybe try adding a window near the door’s and a porch, so it looks like a real cabin. Try adding furniture in the inside and put more detail in walls. A bed and a fireplace would be cool! Also, add trees far apart from each other off. This is great I would love to see more of this soon and keep up the work! :wink:

Looks good! also the house looks good too!

Looks really good and works well with your lighting. All I would recommend is to have larger scaled logs to and perhaps having an inside part to act as the Log insides to make it even more realistic. But other then that it’s really good.

The cabin looks awesome, but you need to add an extra window near the entrance. It may look amazing!

The terrain is nice.

Maybe try adding windows to the front of the cabin and try centering the door to the front of the house so you can add two windows, one on either side of the door. Also put a different kind of material on the roof, something like logs that @Neil_Cicierega1 has already mentioned.

I like the lighting a lot and the way it beams through the windows is extremely cool.

The cabin does look somewhat basic, but the terrain looks pretty decent for your first time making it the only off thing I can see about it is the pool of water.

The cabin colors doesn’t looks good, even the door, it should be like a light orange instead. That’s it.

Looks great!

Here are some improvements you may want to add:

Try adding a fence around the front porch to add some more depth to the front. In addition, add a porch viewing window, and maybe a fitting with a lantern at front as well.

Furthermore, try adding some more support to the porch. The four small, thin, upright legs look odd being the only supports. You could try adding some wedges or beams (beams are preferable) to make it look more like the weight is being sent to the supports. Same can apply to the main house.

Aside from that, adding decorations (such as curtains and a deck chair) should really bring this to life.