Thanks for the feedback, the map is not mine so I had to work with what I had, I had to model the trees and most stuff in the background because the map was hella empty.
It isn’t overlapping, I think it is because of the antlers, they are separated I think.
Yeah I added Motion blur to him, I don’t get what you mean by a ray behind me.
I always get asked to add clouds, but it’s a pain to find some good ones that fit with the theme, the only thing I can do to is maybe model the clouds in blender? Thanks a lot for the feedback.
yeah add in clouds
i am no artist but that will make it better
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The person on the left is overlapping because of the antlers, I didn’t really see that mistake In blender, my bad.
Most of the stuff in the background like the fence, barrels grass and trees were modeled because the map was hella empty, I needed to add some stuff or the background would have been more plain that what it is now.
Lookin good, glad to see the lighting effect done well this time.
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I want to add clouds to most of my art, but it’s so hard to find a good sky that fits with the thumbnail, that I just don’t do it.
Thanks for the positive and kind comment! Really helps me out.
You could have cloud models instead?
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Most of them are realistic or cost money or are copyrighted, and I cant really model but I can try to find some free ones.
try to make one!
you can do it
what the heck is wrong with this man
why blurry
also it looks like he was impaled by the skateboard
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hes supposed to be dashing forward
toolbox maybe? chars30000000000000000000000000
It’S motion blue.
Hats clipping.
That is the worst place to look for models.
This looks llike it’s assaulting my eyes because of all the bright colors. And the rim lighting looks like it was added after in photoshop which looks unnaturral.
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Looks pretty generic. The pose with the ice cream guy is also not very… realistic? The skateboarder is being impaled by his skateboard as well.
I mean bright colors means more interest and such.
Also rim-lighting has to get added in photoshop, especially in scene GFXs because the lighting from area-lights will show on the ground which looks bad.
I mean it’s a cartoony GFX but I can understand why the pose might look bad.
Also any feedback to make this more unique?
tbh he looks like he just was in the mid fight masses church in fnf
ruv is best
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No it doesn’t. Bright colors make you look away from the screen. Get semi bright colors from color.adobe.com
You can make natural rim lights, but that requires skill with lighting. Take a few lighting courses.