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#41

what might be wrong with it then?

#43

His left arm looks really awkward / strange, it seems to be bending backwards so maybe try and fix that and as for the hat arm try and rotate it to be slightly inwards above the head, and make the head look towards the camera.

Other than that it is looking good!

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#44

Add in real looking grain through camera raw. This noise looks like perlin noise, which doesn’t look like real flm grain. Also increase the contrast since old cameras had higher contrast.

#45

the hat arm is the left arm

also im making it like its a magic show and there are a lot of photographers and not like you have time to look at every single one.

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#46

what is perlin noise and camera raw?

#47

Perlin noise is the default noise algorithm. Also if you don’t have photoshop just layer a vintage layer on top.

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#48

it looks good to me what more could you want?

#49

Unless you are a film corporation or a professional, there is always room for improvement :upside_down_face:

#50

what dos the upside down happy face mean

#51

Idk, just added it cuz i felt like it. I was going to put the :slight_smile: emoji, but I thought to put it upside down, just because.

#52

You clearly don’t know what left and right is…

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#53

no, but from the person’s perspective, the hat arm is the left arm

#54

now that you say it the arms do look really weird they look bad

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#55

Also adding onto your point if you make a post asking for feedback, don’t be really dismissive and argumentative just take the criticism and try and work on your skills.

#56

yeah. i knew that. but i was like: ‘no one’ll notice it’

#57

Well we are looking at the picture from the perspective of the camera, therefore the left arm is the one I clearly indicated.

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#58

I’d say that @IceTheOneAndOnly is taking the feedback well.

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#59

I think it looks great, but remember, small details are very important. You got the clothing right, but the hairstyle is pretty modern. I’d suggest changing it to a more trimmed and combed style that would have been popular during 1900-1950’s/ whatever time this is.

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#60

well every one noticed it except me who has -1 brain cell and dont like this

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#61

yeah. but i’m really limited because
A) can’t make my own hair
B) i am limited to ugc and roblox hairs