Feedback on head gore

Hi. This is my first attempt at this. Please tell me what I can improve. I am trying to make a clean slice through it, and I feel it looks off. Thanks!

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I can change colors and spacing pretty much, just let me know what looks really bad.

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skull looks a bit strange, when i did something similar i used a smaller riddling skull (jaw and head split)

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Im trying to make it out of baseparts, but riddling skull seems like a good template.

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What do you think about like thickness, spacing and location of objects? Do the meat locations look right?

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the meat location is good but the skull brings it down

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Okay let me see what I can do.

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That might be a bit to thick it looks like a stone but looks pretty nice

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What part is too thick? The jaw?

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Jaw and a bit over the mouth that little lip thing

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It’s still looks like a rock Kinda I suggest making it thinner

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What part of it? just the like width or thickness of the jaw?

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The jaw and the head should be fixed it’s just to thick, also are you adding gore in the inside Of the skull?

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Yes I plan and I having a brain and mouth cavity

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Lmk I made it alot thinner and changed the jaw alot

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Both of them look a little thick, take a few looks at a real human skull for ref:

A skull is usually thin and not very thick.

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Yes that skull is what I’m trying to get to. also blood in the skull would also be good and would be nicer let’s say in the eyes.

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Also like this would be nice

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