Feedback on my Beach

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#1

I attempted a challenge to build a beach in only about an hour. These are the results.

Beach
Beach752×411 159 KB

Beach 2
Beach 21039×409 237 KB

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#2

I think it could use quite a bit of work. Firstly I would add more chairs and spread them out and change their colors a bit. Secondly I would add a border around the map. Thirdly I would scale and spread out the rocks in the water. They’re the same exact rocks and they’re sorta not really spread out.

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#3

Thanks for the feedback :grinning: Will work on it straight away.

#4

I like blocky stuff, what you can change is those “Rocks” i guess, in the water, they look quite strange, and add palm trees, oh, and also, make something different for each chair, because they look copy/pasted.

Thanks for reading :+1:

#6

I made some adjustments

Screenshot (13)
Screenshot (13)1012×403 316 KB

Screenshot (12)
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#7

I read your comment late. I will take your ideas into concentration and use them. Thanks for the support :grinning:

#8

it need more work because the work you have done it’s not quite done yet, so
 do the best ok

#9

This was just a speedrun to see how much I could do in a short amount of time. It wasn’t really suppose to be amazing. I might use it though in the near future.

#10

I have been thrown back into 2008 with this build :yum:;
Keep Practicing and don’t let anyone’s critiques or comments get you down. Definitely look into tutorials on more advanced building tools, and play in a few building games to see what you can learn. Good luck in your path to development :+1:

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#11

I really like the new version. I understand if you are learning and if you continue you may be good :grin:

#12

I am still learning. Thanks for the feedback :happy2:

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#13

Your welcome, i’m also learning to :smiley:

#14

It’s beautiful. You have a bright future!

#15

I love the concept, but it all seems too ‘blocky’. Firstly, try using the other blocks that are available, such as cylinders, wedges, etc.

Secondly, if you want to make the beach look more realistic, I would try adding sand dunes or cliff edges, with more definition. I wouldn’t expect there to be a sheer dirt wall at a beach, no offense.

Try using wedges or rotated parts to make the beach have a slope into the ocean, and have multiple angles to the beach, there aren’t many beaches that are perfectly square!

Finally, just experiment! Try using the different parts, and terrain.

Very good so far, but those are some improvements that you could increment into the build. Apologies if I come across as harsh!

#16

This would be something amazing for 2012. Man, I miss those good ol’ times on Roblox, thing is, you just can’t revert time by itself. However, for 2020, I’d give it a 2/10. Look, no offence but there’s still a lot of work to be done there, but the idea itself is nice, I love it!

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#17

This looks pretty good. Keep on the good work!

However, I agree with @Akkoard. I think it doesn’t fit in a 2020 place in the current style.

#18

It needs some improvement but overall seems good for your level. I suggest you use a wedge for the sand instead of a part. It’ll be more realistic that way.

#19

Ok, thanks for the support. Epic

#20

I went for an old Roblox style here. It was not suppose to be amazing. Just wanted that to be clear.

#21

I’m assuming you are beginner.
If you are, it’s okay for a beginner but it’s looking too 2011’ish.
Let’s try Roblox’s terrains and water!

Keep up the work, always tell yourself that you need to improve each time you create a new build so that you can build your way up!