Feedback on my (Fantasy?) Sword

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#1

Greetings! I’m a novice modeler and I wanted to make a sword today. I’m not experienced much at modeling and I would like to have some honest feedback! There are some black spots etc. on the model that showed up after I rendered the sword but they aren’t there on the actual model.

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Feedback on my Ottoman themed Saber
What are you working on currently? (2020)
#2

It looks amazing, especially considering that you are inexperienced, as you said. This is true skill! Great job and good luck in your future of modeling. :slight_smile:

#3

Wow, this has just blown my mind. I hadn’t even read the part saying you weren’t experienced, straight as I saw it I thought you had around 2-4 years experience. I then read what you had said and gosh, I am so impressed! :slight_smile: This is a fantastic design and I hope you enjoy your future in Roblox Developing. :smiley:

#4

@MattPrograms and @H_appify thank you both for your great words. I’m glad you liked it.

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#5

no.

no.

no.

no.

impossible.

This is one of the best swords I’ve ever seen honestly. Nice job!

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#6

Thank you for the great words :laughing: :slightly_smiling_face:

#7

That looks like an 8k sword, truely magnificent.

#8

This is amazing! Did you use GFX to make the sword look better?

#9

Yes I rendered it in Blender with cycles rendering engine. Also @worldwarbattle and @dogpdog thank you for the great words :slightly_smiling_face:

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#10

First glance I can see that this is a well modelled sword for an amateur modeler. But, there are aspects of the sword that needs improvement:

  1. The blade is too thick, consider making it thinner
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  2. The blade looks a bit too short, lengthen it a tad
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  3. The guard is too thick:
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  4. The handle needs an increased size:
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  5. This one is optional, but the blades’ curvature should be more exponential than sine(meaning it curves to the point slowly at first, then fast):
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Diagram of a sword:
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#11

Thank you for your suggestions. I will consider them when I make a new one or upgrade this one. By the way the edges of the blade is 0 in size. So, there’s 0 thickness. It’s probably looks like that because the renders angle.

#12

The blade looks like a good size, I compared the OP’s sword and your diagram sword and I found that they both have similar dimensions just scaled a bit.

#13

Love the texturing on this sword it looks great! Although the shape of the handle looks a bit weird.

#14

Yeah it looks a bit off because I took a fantasy sword blade and a real handle for the grip as inspiration.

#15

I can’t even tell if it’s Roblox or not! Keep up the amazing work!

#16

Looks amazing! Great work! :+1:

#17

That’s amazing! Keep it up, Your doing a great job. :zap:

#18

Looks amazing i dont know how i can give good feedback

#19

Thank you for the good words! It probably looks like it’s not in Roblox because I rendered the image in Blender with cycles to get better lightning. But, there won’t probably be a difference other than lightning in Studio too because Roblox Studio supports PBR! Also, @thatgamecool , @Renderbloxian and @NewUrie thank you for the great words. Appreciate it.

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#20

That looks mighty fine actually, good work.