Feedback on my first animation (Blender)

Hi im FireAtacck im a GFX Artist but also i’m making another things. I’ts my first animation on blender. Yeah I know it’s too short only 1 second :smiley: (pls give feedbacks)

Animation:

second animation

Please comment a feedback

If you have any questions you can ask me on discord.

Discord:
FireAtacck#7601

Used programs

Blender 2.82
Movavi Video Editor 2020

My Portfolio : HERE!!

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Hii!
I love the animation and i believe you could add some things if you want to :slight_smile:

  • Try playing with the textures a little, make them more realistic maybe ? depends on u.
  • U could try experimenting with the background a little, it seems kinda plain, maybe it was the point, i dont really know :smiley:

Sincerely, Cloudly

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The eyebrows kind of throw me off. They’re kind of big, so probably make them half as wide? Smaller eyebrows can make your characters look a little more expressive, so they dont always look like this: (ಠ_ಠ)

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Hey! I have a question regarding your animation, how do you make those facial expression it’s really cool and looks 3 dimensional. Please let me know how you make the faces like that.

Basically it’s a blender rig with 3D face, but its not free.
Here is the link of rig video : Ultimate Roblox Rig [Blender] - YouTube