Hello everyone! AgentL06 here,
now that i have become a member of the developer forum i would like to share a sneak peak of my very first game! Despite the game being in early development i would like to share some of its content and would like to see from all of you what should be added and what can be fixed and any tips for scripting or building my game! Anyways i have not really devised a title for the game but i have thought about 2 - 3 game titles that do suit my games story line,(Bullet points)-
1# Finally
2#Final Frontier
3#Final Future
You can let me know in the comments what name you like the most by number or the name or if you have any suggestions please do let me know!
A little more on why i chose these titles to fit the game is due to its storyline and basic fitting in general. The game is a escape based game,âAnd i clearly state this, its not another Piggy ripoffâ. I will make it a round based game for a feel that it gives me a challenge. I will include a bot and a player option for the alpha version, iâll make this game different for itâll offer different mechanics and its not based on anything besides what has been devised in my head. Anyways Players will spawn in a post apocalyptic cabin which has been salvaged and turned into a subtle cabin for its current inhabitants. There will be cut- scenes and camera manipulation for instances for entering a shop that i have constructed called âToms Trading postâ. I already have a plan for the first map and i am already working on it. But on the topics of problems i have encountered are, that i cant really find a light fixture for the atmosphere of the game i have messed around with brightness and the technology for it. That is mainly something that still kind of bothers me right now as i am building all the buildings for my first map as i have already finished the lobby, it only needs some touch ups here and then. If any of you do want a link to the game please let me know," youâll only be able to walk around the lobby". If any of you have any feedback for me or tips for the game Please do let me know!
Thanks a ton for reading this giant topic 
also- if any of you want to know a little snip-it of the story please let me know for i will lend you a little bit of it to help any of you understand itâŚ
Thanks!
Didnât you post something like this earlier? Donât post this without pictures because this is called Cool Creations, it is hard to give feedback about a game we donât even see.
Apologies, Thanks for letting me know!
I will take a couple of screen shots and upload them in the replies!
thanks you so much R02_0
Very nice. Are those trees freemodeled? Consider replacing them.
Looks decent. You should use different textures of wood⌠a lot of this build appears clunky and cluttered. It seems very janky to have planks connecting just to get upstairs.
As @R02_0 said, you should consider making your own models to give yourself better rep and make it overall more authentic.
Ultimately, Iâve reported your post for reposting: Couple of pictures of my game,
Thanks for the feedback!
For the stairs or (way to get up there), What would u suggest?
I made it look like the floor above that connecting to another room had collapsed and that was put there as a stubstitute(apologies for the spelling) Sort of fitting towards that salvaged like cabin during a post apocalyptic scenario. And what color of would do u suggest? by any chance⌠I think maybe a gray-ish color would fit due to the modern fireplace being one of the only white models inside the cabin or safeplace.
R02_2 what sort of trees should i make? im thinking of a type of tree that fits that forest like vibe almost.
I would suggest stairs, if youâre implying the stairs collapsed you should show the collapse and maybe add a ladder or keep it how it is. It doesnât appear apocalyptic as it has energy and there are soda cans in the vending machines albeit one is knocked over. The color is not the biggest issue but the wooden plank material, try to differentiate the colors a little if you can because it changes depth of field.
I also think the trees are fine but you should make it to be your OWN trees.
Pine trees, like those but different. Try to make a lot of different types of trees though.
Thanks for the feedback! I do agree fixing up the clunky-ness of all the wood i might add pipes connecting to the lore of the cabin belonging to someone who owned it before this group of people had claimed as their own.
.Pipes
.brick
.accents
I have not really thought about the characters yet but there will be areas for the specific characters to be located at inside the safe place, Some outside some inside that you might be able to talk to. on the trees i will consider making different models since these were all the same model. And i will probably include some more things for my shop keeper tom since he has an elevator in the store for when you step on you will be able to talk to him and select an option for talking to him âmaybe an easter egg,really dependsâ. and you access the elevator screen fades and you appear in the skin shop where it is themed around the infection based storyline. anyways thanks really! I need as much feedback as i can get for this is my first game!
R02_0 Thanks! Ill consider making different models for the trees. similar to making different types of trees like Birch,Oak,walnut etcâŚ
Okay, btw if you want to tell me stuff I will not get notified by you just saying my name. Either just reply to my comment or put @R02_0, because then I will be able to get a notification and respond.
I forgot to include the @ when saying your name XD
Thanks!
@AgentL06 not to disappoint you, but the title âFinal Frontierâ is already a title of a quite (or originally) popular game. You can still use the name, obviously, and the game has died in popularity quite a lot, but Iâd still advise changing the name. But itâs still all up to you.
@B0bTheBodyBuilder. No offense taken, anyways dont worry about that i already chose a name for the game well its not quite thought too deeply about but i really think its a good title for the game,âFinal Futureâ.
Alright, good luck with your project!
@B0bTheBodyBuilder, thanks a ton! If you are interested the game depending on how hard a work and suffer from over working myself XD. The game should be expected to release mid or late july depending on all the things i gotta tinker around with for the release will be a early alpha.
@Luxorz @R02_0
A little sneak peak at the corrections and feedback you two gave meâŚ
Any feedback?
I have decided on a character also their name will be, âFauxâ they are an engineer which explains the look of the stairs and other soon to be modifications of the safplace/cabin.
If you have any suggestions on names for the character let me know but also any feedback on the look or anything i can add.
Thanks!