( Well you’ve noticed that I didn’t change the character’s shirt, I kept it because you know how chaotic is the shirt catalog, and I can’t find any good shirts for it… )
I redone almost everything, and it’s better than I expected ( or I have a very low expectation… ). I took about 3 hours to finish it ( rendering took more than an hour since my computer isn’t that good ).I’d like to receive more feedbacks from you all again, thank you for stopping by!
This great you should try to improve the sky, and the window looks a bit basic in my opinion, but the shadows were great, it is great but it can be improved with a little more work
Thank you, I’ll try to make the window more detailed. I’m also having trouble finding the right sky background since most of the pictures’ quality is bad
Really nice render, I love the lighting!
One thing I would suggest is to increase the exposure in the sky to match the almost white light on the character and kitchen counters.
You don’t have to add any of it, it’s great just how it is!
The first thing I saw however was that there is no ground outside the window. You should add a ground out there, it looks like your house is floating!
In the end, this is really good for your first GFX, you’ve captured the viewers eyes with the picture and a few other things but if you want them to stare at it then you need to add a lot of details so that they’re stuck in your image taking in it’s complexity and beauty.
