Feedback on my first GFX

turvtle · January 10, 2020, 6:35am

I’m a builder/modeler but I decided to try out GFX for fun. I’d like to know what you guys think. It was intended to showcase a new line of merchandise for a game I created.

Here is what I came up with:

Archasion · January 10, 2020, 8:07am

This is a wonderful look for your very first GFX, but maybe you could change the background to something else, maybe you could change it to a part of the cafe (if it’s for the cafe).

SimplyNodes · January 10, 2020, 8:32am

Yep, awesome job on that UI. love it. But you need to make the background a little more vibrant according to the theme of your cafe and what’s a car doing though in your cafe?

JoolCaat · January 10, 2020, 8:47am

they got a delux parking spot inside the cafe

d_cyph · January 10, 2020, 3:10pm

Wow! For a first shot, That looks great! Keep up the great work!

Turtlepla · January 10, 2020, 3:39pm

It looks very nicely made! It looks amazing for your first ever GFX!

DutchBloxxer · January 10, 2020, 6:55pm

For you first one, wow. Amazing

MA_Guyz · January 10, 2020, 11:09pm

Nice job! Amazing GFX you got there!

turvtle · January 12, 2020, 5:58am

Thank you guys for the feedback! I’ll try messing around with some backgrounds :]